I so wish
that autumn could have caught us,
layed us down onto the ground,
and sometime during October
folded us in golden leaves,
a blanket to sleep in
eternally.
That would have been such a beautiful season,
just you and me,
forever keeping that dream.
And for once,
I would fall,
and not have it be a problem.
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Reviewed by William J. Cryer (Reader)
Reviewed on December 14, 2003
There's poetry crammed into every nuance of your writing. This is lovely.
Jason, I really like the double message here of falling and it not be a problem. It still amazes me how powerful a short write can be.... stay strong...
In Spirit,
Bear
Reviewed by Andi Chrisman (Reader)
Reviewed on October 26, 2003
Absolutely wonderful
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on October 26, 2003
Jason, this is so sweet. I love good heart poetry :)
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Gary
captured well by your pen
Sharron
The vision of this piece supplants one to a crisp Autumn day.
EXCELLENT work.
In Spirit,
Bear
Thank You,
Teresa Emilie