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Last Precious Thing
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Your death broke the last precious thing inside of me. I can't move. I can't breathe. I'm only watching time pass me by, thinking to myself that this never should have been. I wish it hadn't happened. I wish this was all pretend.

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Reviewed by June Thompson (Reader)

Reviewed on January 20, 2004

very much appreciated-

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on January 19, 2004

Your death
broke the last precious thing
inside of me.
I can't move.
I can't breathe.
I'm only watching time
pass me by,
thinking to myself
that this never should have been.
I wish it hadn't happened.
I wish this was all pretend."
Words that I have heard and said too often, Jason! Excellent expression! stay strong....
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by anne cunningham

Reviewed on January 18, 2004

pretty intense

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on January 18, 2004

very passionate sense of loss ...

Reviewed by Andi Chrisman (Reader)

Reviewed on January 18, 2004

"I wish it hadn't happened.
I wish this was all pretend."
I'm afraid we all do. Wonderful write.

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