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Love Someone Half Perfect
by Marlene Dawn → (All Poetry by Marlene Dawn)
  
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When you love someone
you'd give your life
to give them the best you can.
When you love someone
you wouldn't rob their life 
in the waters by the sand.
When you love someone
& you felt inside 
that you couldn't be together.
You would say good bye so their given 
a chance to live half happily ever after.
When you love someone
never think you can change
the person they are inside.
You will rip out their soul
making them choose between
themselves or you by their side.
That might work for a short while
because we ga ga over love.
But down the road you cannot
alter personalities in their soul.
So when you love someone
look at them & love them for who they are.
Gaze deep within their eyes
looking at their huge potential.
There is no one perfect in this World.
If you are searching for that you'll fail.
So love someone half perfect
sailing in the sunset with you .


marlene . 2003


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 Reviews of "Love Someone Half Perfect"
Reviewed on September 21, 2003
This was the best, so very wise and true, I loved this, such reality in this excellent poem, I wish love could be like this,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on September 21, 2003
Marlene...this is very very very realistic and truthful write....I think every body should read this once in their lifetime...a most before they start a realationship....powerful and deep...am glad i didnot missed this gem.....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Karen Cino
Reviewed on September 20, 2003
Excellent write. There is so much truth in this poem. "There is no one perfect in this world." So true. However when you love someone more than life itself, their flaws can turn into a challenge that strenghtens your relationship. I really felt your emotions.

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on September 20, 2003
THIS IS THE TRUTH!!! Screw Dr. Phil and the rest...lol. Seriously, VERY good poetry! You touch all of the reasons in this. If you love someone--set them free. You got down to the core of it in this poem! Very good poetry. I enjoyed reading this. Made me smile. Excellent prose!

Thank you,
Teresa Emilie

Reviewed on September 20, 2003
excellent message in this, marlene. my brother did exactly that with his first wife, who died after they were married 25 years. she was only 52 1/2 when she died; she suffered from severe jra and other health problems; yet, he loved her unconditionally, and he stayed by her side to the end. my daddy was also married to my mother, for nearly 40 years, before she died (13 years ago). my mom was sick with diabetes, and she suffered terribly. god be with those who chose to remain with their mates, even after their mates became sick! :( (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend, karen lynn in texas.

Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
Reviewed on September 20, 2003
Interesting and thought provoking.

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on September 20, 2003
Great message Marlene!

~Joseph

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on September 20, 2003
This is so special!
Thank you for such inspiration.
John

Reviewed on September 20, 2003
Marlene:

This is so wonderfully-written and sooo very true. We all fall in love with the other person just because we love them for being themselves; not to love them so we can change them into someone we can't love.

Great message indeed! *applaus*

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on September 20, 2003
Marlene, many need to read this before they began a relationship. I don't know how many times I've seen people marry and then two years down the road want a divorce. I've heard many say, "Well I thought if we married they'de change". You don't marry people to change them. You marry them to love them, for who and what they are. Okay I'm rambling,,Good write Marlene. Lisa

Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
Reviewed on September 20, 2003
marlene, that is the greatest line that no one is perfect, so love them anyway, which is the way I would take it. well balanced


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