love...sweet longing to embrace
say so much but...love...never shows its face
brought the love, the bliss, the gain
brought the storm, no love...the pain
"women"...pandora's box
fools try to unhinge such locks
but lock is difference, none may see
that like this line they them may be...
...confusion but simple same and odd
GRRRR.....the anger but still she nods
so budding but still same path i go
the unfolding too decieving and too slow
give and give and give and give,
still the downward path is lived
the fault always to the former
taken for thus he is the conformer
thoughts clutter so loves knot is loosed
love can not breath with knot as noose
but as bow, free gives by both sides
hung...will not keep going...will not abide
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Reviews of "bewildered"
Reviewed by michael horetsky (Reader)
Reviewed on July 8, 2003
Hey kid i really like this one.. I hope you are not writing about your father... GRRRRR
Jack London’s cousin writes a heartwarming, young adult story about the glory of life. It is also a heart-pounding adventure to a new and strange world.
A touching, loving and spirtual insight of the dying process, filled with peace, smiles and starting on their journey, taking me with them as far as I could go, returning back with something I didn't have before. Will be out early in 2010..on Kindle
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