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First step (birth and flaw)
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i'm guessin this one's a bit inside....some might not get it just cause it has like....i can't call them "inside jokes" but just inside things


If you sweat in goals of well,


work so hard to withstand hell,


Listen to me,


One day you will be free,


If you sweat in goals of well.


 


Your ernest thought and true breed stature,


May see you through as you mature


You could see,


That one day you must retrieve,


Your ernest thought and true breed stature.


 


You may crack and you may crumble,


You may even trip and tumble,


just hit their tree


for it stand 'for me, and


all who attacks you will surely fumble.


 


For though now those who back-stab are at the place of glee,


But the mind that breathes stars holds the key,


it may be,


with hospitality


Those who hack and nab will fall on one knee.


 


No war or crusade has ever been moral,


No war or crusade has been for a mortal,


but for thoughts and deeds


that contend and intercede,


But no war or crusade has been without turmoil


 


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 Reviews of "First step (birth and flaw)"
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on July 12, 2003
A excellant piece of inward perspective, now let them all hang out! ;O)
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on July 12, 2003
Wonderful work. Thoughtful too. Those inside thingys are profound, once you let them break out. Bravo.

Reviewed on July 12, 2003
An inspiring, instructing and teaching instrument of Social Alertness and Social Responsibility, "First step" (birth and flaw) is a poem that lights the Torch of Justice.

I praise the Author of "First step (birth and flaw) for taking the FIRST STEP and sing REASON.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU


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