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Growing Pains
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Though I may be caught by the silhoutte of the view


Bodies found like air, but mind given to few


Mind given only when soul doth breathe true


How different fate would ping if this then I knew


Instead I lust in the hallows and for this


I am lost


Give care like coins and paid the cost


But for those I kept oh so close


Still took and took till they've overdosed


Luckily, though, still I stand


For now free am I from their controlling hands


The theme unknown, yet still I grow...


...old of the ticks of love and soul


Alas, I write of this in heightened intellegence


But still I wake without the jist of it


For though I follow and though i hound


I await the day my queen is crowned


Await the day I'm found.


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 Reviews of "Growing Pains"
Reviewed by michael horetsky (Reader)
Reviewed on October 27, 2003
Wow young man you write with years untold.. I am very honored to have a son like yourself..You have a rare gift and i am proud of you..POPPY

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 11, 2003
I am impressed and awed.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on August 10, 2003
This is beautiful Evan, heart touching.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on August 10, 2003
Fantastic!!!!

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on August 9, 2003
To wait for true love and to have a taste of how superior it is to all other loves...this is defined justly in your words.

I understand this fully.
Susan

Reviewed by Marley Jensen (Reader)
Reviewed on August 9, 2003
"Mind given only when soul doth breathe true." An awfully fine line to divide, don't you think? Wonderful writing.

Reviewed on August 9, 2003
I like this. A thought-provoking piece!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on August 9, 2003

As I read....I heard, saw and listened to nothing else around me! Who wrote this... you or your soul? Take a bow~~~applause!

Thanks,
Emilie

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on August 9, 2003
Great write, Evan. So what's wrong with being mutualistic?
Leland


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