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The first attempt
by evan m horetsky → (All Poetry by evan m horetsky)
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Never knew you could love so much it hurts,
Well, I really speak true , for all that it's worth.

Every ray of sun, Mother Earth's golden hue,
Reminds me that it's kept lit by you.
I've always had plans and reasons.
But in professing my love I knew not what to do.

Come on just help,
And tell me you love me.
Just say it,
So I could act on a clue.
Then just listen,
One man's attempt to be true .

This bone in my heart, the truth I kept close,
Yet away from the one that always gave me a dose,
Of pure love in all its splender.
But from what you've said I don't know how it goes.

So just cry,
Prove I mean something,
Just scream,
So I know I'm getting to you.
Then just listen,
To one man's attempt to be true .

You have uncovered so many of my tracks,
But this one evaded your whips and cracks.
My plethora of tactical method,
Has proved to succeed in keeping you on your back.

So just feel it,
And I'll read how you answer.
Say something,
It all depends what you do.
Then just listen,
To one man's attempt to be true .

Ok! Here it goes, the grand finale,
Since before I remember my plans were sadly,
To get you to feel as I did.
That I loved you more than you could ever see.

But I hid it,
Due to my self esteem.
I just bit it,
Because the last thing I wanted of you,
Was to listen,
To the first time I've meant I love you.

There, I finally showed what I really meant,
Now i'll dream optimistic, that this'll make the last dent.

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 Reviews of "The first attempt"
Reviewed on February 16, 2004
This was outstanding! I loved what you have written here,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on February 16, 2004
you can't win if you don't play...excellent expression

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 16, 2004
Wow!!

Excellent piece Evan!!

Magnificent in every way!!

Love Tinka


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