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In words you can understand
by evan m horetsky → (All Poetry by evan m horetsky)
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Enough of the loving, this caring, this dream,
I mean, when you wake up it loses most of its sheen,
and luster,
I can't just go under, life strikes me with lightning so I match it with thunder.

Kaboom! By the first step outta my room,
I get a whiff of the end, as it always looms,
And the distress,
Oh! it's just the mistress, the best at her way of dealing with stress.

So much for this notion of cracking down,
All a man really wants is to be homeward bound.
With a lady,
I know it's crazy but just maybe you'd let me say your my baby.

Oh! there I go falling back into this vision of you,
A sea of luscious views, now you just have to follow me through,
and agree,
To be my first heavenly beauty sitting right there next to me.

On my crusade to the top, can't brake, won't stop.
Like a bullet through the mullet of city hall as it drops..
..Ambition,
Just lemme get this kiss in, as my soul blurs out of their pious vision...

...Of me and you, like joining honesty and truth,
My thoughts can be qeued, if you'll just say you do,
Read my hints!
Every time I have sinned is for you with this utterance and its loving tint.

Of uncertainty, but you most certainly put the hurt in me,
When you said you could never see to be with me,
Isn't it clear,
That from tear to tear my whole damn year was spent getting you here.

Just to be stompled upon like a decrepit pawn,
In a game of looking forward, but you just look beyond.
My attempt,
The most loving hit in the chest is when you just don't get...

...That when two and two is four, the sole thing I can ask for,
Is for you to see it's You I adore; so let's explore,
"Relationship",
This long awaited trip, I just don't wanna make a move without a simple tip.

Ok, I hope that finally made it clear, at least maybe even caught your ear?
Well it helped this tear in my heart because without you there,
I'm incomplete.
Just grab a seat, I just wanted to be the greatest man you would ever meet.
It'd be a treat if this feat swept you off your feet,
'Cause it has for me.


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 Reviews of "In words you can understand"
Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on February 28, 2004
"life strikes me with lightning so I match it with thunder."
Excellent line!

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on February 21, 2004
My god, Evan.. internal rhyme, aliteration, some masterful word play, as well: 'feat/feet' etc. you ramble without losing focus. That's an amazing ability while still being poetic and true to a form. Very impressive. You may not be entirely James Joyce(ian) yet, but I can see you heading there. What you're espeically good at, in my opinion, is handling a theme like this, which is oft written by poets and owning it with your clever delivery. This is damned cool! katy xox.

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on February 21, 2004
Yes a dynamite!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 20, 2004
Sentiments effectively expressed, Evan. Thank you for this offering. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Judith Pleasant
Reviewed on February 20, 2004
Evan,
This is quite an awesome write.
As the saying goes, "If you love someone let them go-if they are yours-they will return."
If not, they will be replaced with someone that is better for you.
Sorry for your pain, but keep in mind that God knows what he is doing. He never closes one door before he is ready to open another.
Hang in there and do what you do well( write poetry) until that sunshine comes shining at your doorstep.
Many Blessings,
Judith

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on February 20, 2004
What a mind!!!..evan I like your work..exceptional stuff..TY!!

vesna :)

Reviewed by Karen Cino
Reviewed on February 20, 2004
Awesome write. So much imagery, emotions and feels being conveyed here. You did an excellent job.

Karen

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on February 19, 2004
Evan....fantastic write!!!!

Reviewed on February 19, 2004
A very interesting read!... :o)

~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 19, 2004
Excellent piece Evan!!

Lots of promises and hope in this one!!

How cold se restst!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on February 18, 2004
Very good. The 2nd line says it all.


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