Excellent write. Such powerful words for such a young man. Thank you for sharing your talent and words.

Karen

Who is your leader? Take me to her, or him..
You apparently have been taught well..
May the force be with you.....
Great write Evan.......

An Enlightened Man, you are, Evan. It's refreshing to see/hear of a young man who believes integrity is at the core of a man. Hang on to those ideals. This is a wonderful write, thank you.

Excellent write, beautifully crafted, no wasted words!

Evan, unlike some of my dear friends here, I think your age is exactly when that grey matter kicks in, when you question and begin to see what's out there and which paths into the fray you may take... the trick, the real secret, is learning how to hang onto your ideals, your vision... don't let the world invade... YOU do the invading.. but these fine people are right about this: you ARE amazing! REading this one can nearly see those wheels turning... don't ever let them stop. katy xox.

profound poem! i see we use similiar styles, which i know you use to distinguish how it should be spoken ...

Excellent write. Enjoyed the read.

Very good poem. Evan you are a talented poet. keep up the good work. really enjoyed.

Very insightful write!