The Gypsy Madame Fernandez Meets A Ghost Pt 3 (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 28, 2006

Then saw his form by windowsill

Still as statues, shocked at first
Dazed and mute, their eyes conversed
Questions booming in their minds
Without a sound...thoughts intertwined

I've had this kind of experience, though darker than this interaction. Imagine a ghost forgetting his own name? Huh, put's a different slant on not being able to spell one's own name.
The plot continues.

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on May 4, 2004

Hauntingly alluring. Just gone through three.

Fletcher B

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on April 23, 2004

so haunting and very creative Lady A.

Reviewed by andrea coltman

Reviewed on April 23, 2004

Fantastic write...best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on April 23, 2004

Ahhhh, romantic overtures across The Great Divide! I am fascinated: is HE wanting to "come back" or is it her astral travelling that is bringing him into such close proximity such that there is connection between them?! To be continued...you've got me!! KB

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 23, 2004

(((anita)))

this is enchanting, creative, and brilliantly composed. :)

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on April 23, 2004

Love the play of thoughts and words. Since I am on the road I might miss a part of this on going series, could you send me a message when you add on to this?

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on April 22, 2004

I want to read the rest this is so creative and well written.
ladyA

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on April 22, 2004

Well now, this is awesome Lady A
Thanks for stopping my way....

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 22, 2004

Seems you have us all hooked Lady A! ;-)
A splendid mesmerizinbg series!

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on April 22, 2004

Fantastic write...I am eagerly looking for the next installment.
Allen