The Gypsy Madame Fernandez Gets A Room Mate Pt 5 (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on November 1, 2006

That's why it is a good idea to peer through the curtain or look through the peep hole before opening the door to invite the stranger in. Did it once with a woman. She overwhelmed us with her robust personality. What irked us was that she turned the tears on and off as if scripted. We never knew where we were with her. Eventually she ran out of tears and never came back. Phew!

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on May 4, 2004

Just finished 5. What better frined to have than a male ghost. And I'll wager that he doesn't leave the toilet seat up.

Fletcher B

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on April 26, 2004

Some energies can be really pesky when they do not understand their actions are not exactly wanted. Great write!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on April 25, 2004

And the beat goes on. And the beat is soft voodoo drums coming out of the dark jungle of the homo sapiens even darker thoughts. Write on. Carry on.

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on April 25, 2004

hahahaha
guess i gotta play catch-up

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on April 25, 2004

hahaha this was great...I could just picture him
on the esaalator...very interesting story and so
well written Anita...gosh...I wish I had written it..LOL..
floria

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on April 25, 2004

Oh no!! Part 5 already and not looking too good - for the cross-realm relationship that is, of course, NOT your stunning creativity here, which has us all gripped, Anita! I don't know whether to laugh or to cry!! I hope Steven Spielberg drops by... can quite see this taking off Hollywood-style with Julia Roberts and Jim Carey - quite an explosive combination! Apart from this classy write, the graphics and quotes contribute to this whole work being in a league of excellence all on its own. You have certainly found a very strong voice with this mini-series and it would be tempting to think that you may have started a trend - but few of us could even BEGIN to take this sort of thing on, so hats off to you - you go, girl!! Kate

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 25, 2004

Delightful piece Anita!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)

Reviewed on April 25, 2004

As usual Anita, you continue to amaze me with your writings, i could read you all day and do just that quite often, very well done here, this reads like a gem, could be down to the fact it is...take good care..Mark xx

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on April 25, 2004

An intriguing room mate, indeed. Love this series, and the opening quote.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on April 24, 2004

Clever putting this serial in to poetry.

Why do squirrels swim on their back?

To keep their nuts dry((:
Keep up the good stuff...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 24, 2004

Hahahaha!laydee A you are a deeeeelight!
so the spectre goes modern, what next?;-)LOL
( pun with pears lol;-)

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on April 24, 2004

Hi Lady A:

I have not been here for a while, so I will have to catch up on all the previous ones. This sounds like a wonderful continuation of a story. Good write.

~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~