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Bluest Hue
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The sky is not less blue because the blind man does not see it~Danish Proverb

 

Bluest Hue

 

The meloncholy indigo sky

Breezed a solo, hopeless, sigh

Felt so alone, as none did care

To share his bleak and lonely air

 

The sun reaps love and constant praise

And all lament when splendor fades

They suffer night, to be adorned

Beneath his glow, alive at dawn

 

For when he rests, the earth does too

And no one sees...night's bluest hue!!

Desolution was his fate

Behind the dusk........of heaven's gate

 

The meloncholy indigo sky

Languished and began to cry

No one heard  him bawl and weep

For all were rested..... fast........asleep

 

Droplets of his crystal tears

Sprinkled on the night so clear

Silver icing speckled bright

Lit the wailing, lonely, night!!

 

Sparkles dancing, spinning, round!

People pointing from the ground!

Smiling, awestruck at the sky

He cried with joy....till he was dry

 

**TWINKLE TWINKLE**

 

A

 

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 Reviews of "Bluest Hue"
Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
Reviewed on September 21, 2004
Dear Lady A

So beautifully composed and superb imagery, thanks for sharing.

warm hugs
Elga
will respond a.s.a.p. not forgotten :-)

Reviewed by Anthony Hall
Reviewed on September 21, 2004
Wonderful poem Lady A. I felt the tears of the indigo sky, heard the whisper of his sigh.

Your words gave that which is silent such a powerful voice!

Anthony

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on September 21, 2004
Lady A, although I have been extremely busy lately, I have continued to read all of your spectacular poetic creations since I’ve joined AD. I have enjoyed reading them and have found that with your extraordinary poetic talent, style and grace, your brilliant star shall illuminate the Heavens long after we are gone from this world. I shall carry the amazing memories of your enduring wonders throughout eternity. You have raised the perception level in all who visit your extraordinary Den, and especially in those who are willing to call themselves human beings, authors and poets. Thank you for sharing your exceptional compositions. Take care and be well. Keep The Faith.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on September 20, 2004
lady A~

One awesome poem.....
"Droplets of his crystal tears

Sprinkled on the night so clear

Silver icing speckled bright

Lit the wailing, lonely, night!!"

LP

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 20, 2004
Fantastic write Anita!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed
Reviewed on September 20, 2004
You brought the sky to life Lady A, glad I read this before turning in tonight,
blessin's
cynth'ya lewis reed

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 20, 2004
a wonderful atmosphere you've created in this poem ... beautiful imagery!

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on September 20, 2004
A really fantastic write. Wonderfully done.

Allen

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 20, 2004
Lvoe this write! :-)

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)
Reviewed on September 20, 2004
Wow, this is a wonderful poem...simply wonderful, filled with such passion for the twilight magic...this one is a keeper, and in your own words...I wish I wrote it...this is great poetry...ahhh...((hugs)) Michael

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 20, 2004
Saving this creative beauty, a magical trip into indigo!
Love i...Lady A!!!

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on September 20, 2004
Beautiful ambiance and emotion sprinkled throughout this delightful poem...Lady

Exquisite...
Peter

Reviewed by Mari Laureano (Reader)
Reviewed on September 20, 2004
reads like a lullaby..lovely images thruout...
love&light,
**Mari**

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on September 20, 2004
A beautiful image, painted in poetic hues.

Reviewed on September 20, 2004
Wonderful creative write! Well-done!

Sandie May Angel

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 20, 2004
A brilliant, atmospheric poem.

Wonderfully crafted...

Reviewed on September 20, 2004
(((lady a)))

my favorite time? nighttime. so the bluest blue indigo sky is not alone--for i am watching. looking at the stars, searching for northern lights and meteors--and enjoying the feeling of cool arms wrapped around me. :)

a most beautifully wrought poem--thank you, dear (((friend)))

(((HUGS))), love and continued prayers, karla. :)

Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 20, 2004
Droplets of his crystal tears
Sprinkled on the night so clear

this is magnificent!

sueb

Reviewed on September 20, 2004

Nice and colorful write; blue so happens to be my favorite color! Well done, Anita!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on September 20, 2004
A beautiful write. The proverb you quote is priceless. Wonderful rhyme. Enjoyed.


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