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In the Morning Disappear
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The sun is but a morning star.  ~Henry David Thoreau


In the Morning Disappear

 
Magic tribe across the sea
Speak in tongue to sky and tree
Hear the harmonies of  stone
Cast no shadow, walk alone
 
Touch the mirror of like minds
On the midnight moon of blind
Thread the magic twine of light
Starry tapestry of night
 
Thoughts arise through tumbled sleep
Boulders winged escape the deep
Milled as grain for morning's bread
Renewed the spirit sleeps in bed
 
Do the guides know, what they do
As the sleepers, rise, anew
Come the morrow, tasks will turn
For the sleepers guide as learned
 
Magic tribe across the sea
Speak in tongue to sky and tree
Hear the harmonies of  stone
Cast no shadow, walk alone
 
Fluid magic in the air
Aqua splashes cleanse the bare
Free the mind and purge all clear
In the morning....disappear
 
Pax
A
8/29/07


I have no idea why, but after reading Kate's  Suggestive Sea poem, this one came to me.  Go figure lol


 


pc art by me!
 
 
 


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 Reviews of "In the Morning Disappear"
Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on August 31, 2007
Dearest Anita

You never fail to amaze and entertain me with your eloquent and spiritual outpourings.

Never rest your golden quill my friend

Much Love

Peter

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on August 30, 2007
Anita, I am totally bowled over by this beauty in concept and expression. My prosaic thoughts by comparison are as the chaff blown from the grain of wheat or as the grit panned to leave the nugget of gold. The mind is an amazing thing. I can only think that your own imaginative consciousness was ALREADY working these thoughts into shape and that the ebb and flow of how I perceived the motion of the sea to be like the gauzy hints and intentions of words and their world of contradictions just became the hook/conceptual co-ordinates for this glorious thought-stream to take its bearing from. In reality, I am sure this most beautiful poem was already about to be born, like the nebula it is.

Magic tribe across the sea
Speak in tongue to sky and tree
Hear the harmonies of stone
Cast no shadow, walk alone

Fluid magic in the air
Aqua splashes cleanse the bare
Free the mind and purge all clear
In the morning....disappear

Just the words alone weave such mysticism that you can wrap yourself in and sail the seven seas with... You are without doubt one of the most gifted and talented wordsmiths to grace our pages here. Thank you for this, and for breaking your writing fast. This was worth the wait! Love, Kate xx

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 30, 2007
A fascinating poem, and once again, a marvelous quote.

(Where have you been, Queenie? I could sure use you in my latest epic war.}


Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on August 30, 2007
Oh ET, I was not saying I felt the poems were connected, that was not my intent,but after reading Kates about her give and take of thoughts inspired by the sea, this poem popped into my head...lol......and I have not written for ages! Thanks to all who commented........pax A

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on August 30, 2007
a well written work-i enjoyed the easy flow of your words

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 30, 2007
I can see the correlation between the two and I am sure Kate is honoured to know that her beautiful work inspired the making of this fine piece as well.

hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on August 30, 2007
This was oh so good, it just flowed throughout, enjoyed.......

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 29, 2007
Fantastic poem and pic, but can't see the connection to Kate's;-) Good to see you Anita!

ET

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on August 29, 2007
Interesting pen,Hugs

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on August 29, 2007
Sounds like a hopeful chant... Kinda like in Macbeth.
But I like this ones clarity...


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