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Angels On The Slip
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If the sky falls we shall catch larks.
[1670 J. Ray English Proverbs 143]
 



Angels On The Slip
 
I heard the sky was falling
Time for the air to rest
The sun was leaning lower
As  heaven came to nest
 
Descending oh so quietly
Cushioned by the clouds
Unyoked by the universe
Drifting without sound
 
Rippled on the split
Billowed on the wave
Like a sail of crystal air
Rolling down concave
 
I heard the sky was falling
As night and day blend fade
With colors straight from heaven
Umbrellaed on cascade
 
Then as the heavens drifted low
We stroked by finger tip
Those that flew above our reach


Angels on the slip
 
Pax
A
9/20/07
 

 
 
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 Reviews of "Angels On The Slip"
Reviewed by David Delaney
Reviewed on September 24, 2008
Wonderful,wonderful poem Pax, love it.

Dave.
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on September 22, 2008
An exquisite poem! I like the magical feel:)
Sheila
Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on September 11, 2008
...reminds me very much of a few angels I know of...when my sky was falling... dreaming of fingering them again... --Charlie
Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on September 3, 2008
LOVE the last stanza...
Cryssa
Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)
Reviewed on October 11, 2007
Anita this is a heavenly piece of writing. I was caught up in the images you created here while enjoying the perfect meter and smooth flow of your words. This one deserves to be read more than once.
~Butch Howard
Reviewed by Keith Rowley
Reviewed on October 11, 2007
You write really beautiful, flowing verse. I enjoy very much the multi-faceted metaphores you.
You've brightened my day.

Keith
Reviewed by Ann Scarborough
Reviewed on October 2, 2007
This is beautifully profound. "Heaven came to nest." Beautiful imagery and poetic flowing.

Love,
annie
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on September 29, 2007
Ahhh... Angels... one of my enduring preoccupations and motifs... particularly the City kinds... Beautiful words conjure both the feather softness and the tensile strength of our sinuous friends and I love the graphic... could be a city sculpture somewhere, done in fine metals. Lovely tone and movement to this write. Love, Kate xx
Reviewed by Patricia Bankhead (Reader)
Reviewed on September 29, 2007
Enjoyed reading and beautifully written.
Love and Hugs,
Patty
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 23, 2007
Excellent write!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on September 22, 2007
"...Then as the heavens drifted low
We stroked by finger tip
Those that flew above our reach"

Oh, to truly touch an angel's wings is like having an incredible friend on earth.

Kathy

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on September 22, 2007
very beautifully written-
Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)
Reviewed on September 22, 2007
Stirring! Striking! Superb imagery! Loved the sprituality you have threaded through this piece. Thank you, enjoyed this very much. Panda :)
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on September 21, 2007
loved the pic and your words
awesome!!!

truly enjoyed
Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on September 21, 2007
What an insight Anita. Appealing in every way. And the image perfectly supports and enhances your thoughts. I love the wide-eyed spiritual inquisitiveness in this. Blessings ...
Richard
Reviewed by Michael Guy
Reviewed on September 21, 2007
I love that proverb, an intriguing, metrical write; how one thinks of this in poetry is beyond me. Fascinating enought to check out more of yours. Thanks
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on September 21, 2007
Oh my ,very beautiful writing...Hugs
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
Reviewed on September 21, 2007
Oh my goodness Lady A, this is incredibly visual and beautiful.
Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on September 21, 2007
Anita,

Mustn't let any of them angels pass us by. You've a powerful muse my friend. The power to please and comfort are known to but a few. Bless You Always, Paul.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Reviewed on September 20, 2007
Lady A,

Beautiful poetry, you captured Heaven powerfully!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 20, 2007
Vibrant write with such billowing bright images that make one look past the words into the depths of the sky itself.

Fee
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on September 20, 2007
Only an angel could possibly have the inside on poetic balance like this!
beautiful as only your heart can write.
Love,
Susan
Reviewed by Lew Duffey
Reviewed on September 20, 2007
A Beautiful write. It caught the wonder of Heaven in a few short lines.
God Bless,
Lew
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