Soar Without Grip (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 14, 2008

Wisdom with a twist in the end; you have expressed your thoughts through an effective poem.

Axilea

Reviewed on March 7, 2008

Yeah, when the laughter and weeping, peace and war, sanity and insanity, and life and death become the same, then we know that the circle has stopped - at least for those souls who have loosend their final grip on the circle of life and have fallen asleep.

Cheerie
Dai

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on March 6, 2008

Makes me think of a spinning dime or a never-ending elipsis... and of the earth spinning on it's tilted axis. While in motion, even our off-kilter is balanced. We gather our energies from went before and hand the baton on to what lies ahead. Great work of words and inspiration as always! xx

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 5, 2008

Superb poem that captures the art to perfection! I love the art it is exceptional and mesmerizing!

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on March 5, 2008

I loved this! I love the picture too... fabulously interwoven and circular in nature.

Time changes, but not human nature.

Cryssa

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on March 3, 2008

Some profound thoughts A, and the core indeed is ever the same. Great poem.

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on March 2, 2008

love that dizzying intellect... --Charlie

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on March 2, 2008

Nope, we just have more toys to distract us from real loving and life.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 2, 2008

Very well done!!

Love tinka

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on March 2, 2008

Very nicely put...and to capture the source of what life is in so few words yet also very real.

Fee

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on March 2, 2008

a wonderful poem, love it!

Reviewed by Scott Tacke

Reviewed on March 2, 2008

I was reminded of Nietzsche's 'eternal recurrence.' 'A loop of illusions', indeed. And if truly so, perhaps WE ARE the 'mortals before.' You packed a great deal to ruminate and discuss in only sixteen lines. Excellent!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on March 2, 2008

Those that forget history are condemned to repeat it - one of my very favorite quotes - came to mind reading this one - excellent, Lady A.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 2, 2008

WOW! EXCELLENT!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on March 2, 2008

I believe this is the best poem I haver ever read insofar as making perfectly clear, in a simplified manner, that old adage . . . "History repeats itself" over and over and . . . Yeah I know that is redundant, but this is my comment . . . LOL . . . VERY well done bit of writing here . . .

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 2, 2008

The Ancient Circle of Life - something we should all strive to protect.

And quite a lovely graphic, Queenie.

Reviewed by Ingeborg von Finsterwalde (Reader)

Reviewed on March 2, 2008

Powerful write we should all take to our hearts. " The centuries change, But not, human core " ...
If only we could! Very well said.

Best always,
Ingeborg