If we could all hear one another's prayers, God might be relieved of some of his burdens. ~Ashleigh Brilliant
Asian Sea
She felt thoughts that came to be
Relaxing by an Asian sea
As though another asked advise
Without a word, and yet concise
The question formed was not her own
For she sat by the shore alone
A wind's plea of inquirey
A haunting from an Asian sea
The mind plays tricks, as we well know
As thoughts unbidden come and go
Insistent question came by row
Upon the waves both high and low
A soul sat on another shore
And to the sea she did implore
She spoke the language of salt tears
As they splashed into waves come near
As there beside an Asian sea
A woman felt another's plea
For long ago she felt the same
Alone, afraid, and full of pain
Then in her heart, she said a prayer
For one in need, out there, somewhere
For there by spirit, hands were clutched
And comfort cloaked, without a touch
Anita,
They say prayers do wonders. Sometimes it works, and sometimes it doesn't. I guess it depends on what's meant to be. This poem is haunting. I feel this moment as if I've lived it before...sitting in deep thought. Love and Hugs,
Sheila
Ah, three thousand miles over the ocean, three thousand light years from the land of the rising sun - captured by her loneliness; her enchanting beauty shimmering magically.
A breath away from heaven
This is absolutely stunning! I loved the thought conveyed, as well as the words used and image created...the photo is fabulous as well.
This one is my favorite of yours...
this is remarkable in time and place, Anita. I love how the breath of prayer - REAL prayer - unites the soul and spirit of the world, regardless of creed, gender or race. Intercession might be described as understanding the heart of God for another person... or, conversely, uplifting the REAL needs as seen by God FOR another soul. You have expressed that innate "knowing" direct from the mind of God into the spirit of one woman here. Such prayer can't help but be effective because it stems from the source, the Godhead itself. I love this very tangible expression of a supernatural gifting and grace. LOVE IT! Kate xx
Simply beautiful. Poems such as yours is why I love it here. Your poems have a mystical energy that none can compare. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
You've added a wonderful legend to the Parasol lady. This tribute is so near to what really occured. I believe this with all my heart.
You're tops in my book Amita!
A stunning piece of writing expressing the depth and infinite qualities of the tides, also of the souls who dwell by the waters edge. Very moving and serene. Thank you.
This is the ultimate, Pax...in every sense of the word. So much caring, understanding, love, respect, spirit, and especially calming! Wonderful work you have written and shared; you did more than justice to the pic. Thank you...
Peace and Appreciation ~~ Micke
Our culture has taught us to believe in many ideas which aren't actually real. Exposing these illusions allows us to recover the power to live our lives according to our deepest desires.
Our culture has taught us to believe in many ideas which aren't actually real. Exposing these illusions allows us to recover the power to live our lives according to our deepest desires.
They say prayers do wonders. Sometimes it works, and sometimes it doesn't. I guess it depends on what's meant to be. This poem is haunting. I feel this moment as if I've lived it before...sitting in deep thought. Love and Hugs,
Sheila
A breath away from heaven
Regards
Dai
I am particularly moved by the last two stanzas.
Axilea
This one is my favorite of yours...
Cryssa
Ron
God bless,
Lew
hugs
fee
Simply beautiful. Poems such as yours is why I love it here. Your poems have a mystical energy that none can compare. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
Jack
You're tops in my book Amita!
Blessings and love,
Susan
Peace and Appreciation ~~ Micke