For My Loved Ones (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Adam Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on October 29, 2003

There's a crisis in my family right now so I'm feeling closer to them. All these memories are coming back...I've been meaning to write a poem about this feeling and these memories but I haven't been able to find the words. Until I do I'll have this poem. Thank you.

Adam

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

~Lady A~
This is truly touching, moving and emotional poetry in every way!
You have in the most gorgeous and romantic way I know possible expounded upon TRUE UNCONDITIONAL LOVE...EXQUISITE WORK!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

So touching and wise a write with the holidays approaching. I needed to read this today.

(((hugs)))

~Jackie~

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

A beautiful write of the enduring power of love.

Reviewed by KJ McPhee

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

beautiful poem from a caring mother. I'm 'with you' on this one... good work! joe

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

Beautiful sentiments! Wonderful write indeed!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

wonderful sentiments..difficult to live...kudos for expressing them so well...

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

Gorgeous pic and sediments to your loved ones.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

Anita this one warms the heart!!

Lovely caring write from the heart!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

Family is everything, Anita and this write only amplifies my belief. You express the bond of your love very well towards those that you have as your own...no matter where they may go Beautiful write.
Amor

Reviewed by Vicky Jeter

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Hi Anita
I really get you. I actually met my Mom in astral time shortly after she died. Then a few weeks later I had this powerful dream
that she was being drawn into an experience where the people would only apprciate her gifts, but not really know how to Lover her.
It felt like advance notice, and I prayed she be guided higher.
Vicky

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

I agree with Dana...This is a stunning, heartfelt....and most inspiring poem.ty, Dani

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Anita, I hope all is well with your loved ones? This portion is the most potent:

"I only wish to comfort you, thru choices you may make
My bond to you is strong and true, and NEVER CAN IT BREAK"

That is all they need to hear...or read from you. No truer expression of love is needed.

~ Sara

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

That is some commitment. That is what is known I suppose as "unconditional love." It is the only way the world will evolve and survive. Thank you for this offering.

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

I love your rhyme Lady A!! This is Beautiful!

Jack

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Your family would be very proud of this one. Great write.

Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Lady A

"FOR MY LOVED ONES" a beautiful and devotional dedication. A lovely orchestrated write filled with a wonderful breath of fresh air!

Thank you

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

A nice heart warming write...
Have a great night...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Beautiful loving write!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Anita, a wonderful affirmation of your love for family! this was beautifully expressed and written...

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

What a heart wrenching poem. Loved it

George