Etching Memories (poem) by Lily of Lough Neagh a.k.a C. Dennis-Woosley on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 18, 2013

rolls right off the lips ... smooth ...

Reviewed by Mark Huntsman (Reader)

Reviewed on March 18, 2013

Just great Lily, let everything be engraved with that love!

Mark

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on March 17, 2013

A muse-inspired beautiful and lyrical verse!
Blessings, xx
Christine

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on March 13, 2013

Splendid verses and rhyme...love the meter and the images encompassed within. Let not the heart be as fragile as the one written in sand.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford

Reviewed on March 13, 2013

Beautiful write.

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)

Reviewed on March 11, 2013

"Let naught the waters wash it
engraved it must remain
one-heart two names within it
scribed pyramids the same"

These four lines encircle the human condition in the last two of those lines. That is colossal, Lily. ~~ Diana

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson

Reviewed on March 9, 2013

So inspiring is this love
with which you so elegantly
write *Lily* Opening ones
heart to an amazing warmth

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Reviewed on March 9, 2013

to be able to share amoment like that with someone special is a gift.YOu brought this to life.

Reviewed by Diane Miller (Reader)

Reviewed on March 9, 2013

Your visual expression is always felt, words deep from the heart in this poem.

Di

Reviewed by Gail D (Reader)

Reviewed on March 9, 2013

This is really a beautiful poem Carol, very romantic dreams.

Gail

A beautiful new picture of you as well.

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger

Reviewed on March 9, 2013

~Lily~
Beauty in the etched heart, scribed initials and the sounds of waves
ever to remain the tears of love endearing within your hearts.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on March 9, 2013

Beautiful Write enjoyed reading
Love & Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Laura Fall

Reviewed on March 8, 2013

So Enchanting and such a lovely photo to go along with this beautiful poem Laura

Reviewed by Gert van Weenen (Reader)

Reviewed on March 8, 2013

What a wonderful expression of love and romance, drawing a heart for you on the beach with both names in it. He must have touched your heart deeply with it.
You both share the same feeling of romanticism.
What a beautiful pair of lovers you are Carol

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on March 8, 2013

Carol, Anything between two lovers is romance to me...

Love,

Deborah

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 8, 2013

I just observed two bald eagles soaring outside the window over the river on the mountainside here and I find your words most apt and timely. Thank you for sharing this gift, "Lily." Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Dark Knight

Reviewed on March 8, 2013

Beautiful poem as you are as well

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on March 8, 2013

I am not much into romance as you well know, but this one has a different flair that I think is really quite a neat way to picture romance...hope thats understandable...e

Reviewed by Budd Nelson

Reviewed on March 8, 2013

so romanticly stated of two who left their mark and made a memory
budd

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on March 8, 2013

A beautiful memory with your love, beside the sea. A more beautiful scene I can't imagine.

Ron

Reviewed by Ed J.

Reviewed on March 8, 2013

Some memories are forever and some must fade away. Wonderful memory of love.

Stay well and keep writing
Eddy

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on March 8, 2013

Sometimes, memories are all we have to live with. Love the photo.
Cheers,
Dan