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Flames
by Susan Bergeron → (All Poetry by Susan Bergeron)
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Only a small flame

But it leaps higher

And higher

As the breeze

Of his entry

Feeds

Its

Passion

And the flames

Leap higher

And higher

Until there is

No longer oxygen

Enough for them

To breathe and

They die down

To rest

In the

Afterglow.

 

 

 

Susan Bergeron

July 13, 2011

 

 


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 Reviews of "Flames"
Reviewed by Chip Bergeron
Reviewed on August 7, 2011
WOW!!!!!
Like the poem, LOVE the poet!!!

Chip Bergeron

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on July 19, 2011
WONDERFUL IMAGERY EXPRESSING THE BEAUTY AND PURENESS OF TRUE LOVE'S PASSION. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on July 14, 2011
What an impressively effective style and metaphor, Susan!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Katharine Sparrow
Reviewed on July 14, 2011
Smooth and sensual, this poem is pure delight to read!

Reviewed by Debbie Lacy
Reviewed on July 14, 2011
Awesome! Very well written as I looking into the flame of my candle feeling the essence of your poem! Thanks for sharing! :)

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on July 14, 2011
Well sustained metaphor, Susan,
with passion and resonance.

John


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