Broken (poem) by John H Bidwell on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 8, 2004

Yes, you will, John. With the love and support of friends... yes, you will. And don't forget that it's always in the darkness that the light shines brightest. ;)

Hugs,
Tami

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 3, 2004

we must always endure to endeavor ... well done ...

Reviewed by John Banasiewicz Jr

Reviewed on June 3, 2004

Sad write but if it is you put your trust in close friends and for sure with there strength and a strong hand you will find your way.
Life sometimes is like a dark storm cloud but if we look hard and thru it the sunshine is waiting to shine down on us.
Tommy

Reviewed by Bonnie Torrente

Reviewed on June 3, 2004

Hello John!
I hope this isn't you, love, but if it is, you're not going to die. You'll just feel like it for a while. It's time for new experiences in your life. Good write.

Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on June 2, 2004

This was so sad and deeply touching, just touched my heart this morning, beautifully written heartache,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on June 1, 2004

So sad Jhon....

Reviewed by Rose L

Reviewed on June 1, 2004

This is a very touching write. I especially am moved by the last line...."Without a promise I'll embark To find my way somehow." Perhaps there is no promise, but we always have friends.

~Rose~

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle

Reviewed on June 1, 2004

This is somewhat sad, John, but yet, so full of hope. You will find your way. I have faith in that much. You already have a start in the ability to place your thoughts on paper. That, in itself, is personal healing power. Every day's a new day and a new chance to start over. Do not ever forget that.
Take care,
Jill

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 1, 2004

Yes you will find your way, and you never know it
may be a better way. Hard to believe but it happens.
You have such a gift for poetry, the rhythm and rhyme a joy!

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on June 1, 2004

if this is autobiographical, i'm sorry for your loss, but every ending is a new beginning, maybe it does't' seem like a good one but it can turn out that way

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on June 1, 2004

Oh Jon this is really heartfelt Buddy!!

Take care and hey...stand tall okay...you will be okay!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on June 1, 2004

So heart touching and sad, blessings to both of you.

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on June 1, 2004

You have captured a sad reality. Fine poem.