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Let Go
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Let Go

I’ve let it go, this won’t drag on.
Another dream has come and gone.
I want these things with all my might
So I can’t see what’s in plain sight.

There’s nothing left but be confused.
Where love could be I’m only used.
At least this time I saw it first
And covered when the bubble burst.

I wonder why this had to be-
My seeing what I want to see.
And why you let it go so far.
I never could know who you are.

You had your chance but played a game
That left me like a snuffed out flame.
So even if you don’t smell smoke
It’s over now, and that’s no joke,

John H. Bidwell



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 Reviews of "Let Go"
Reviewed by D May (Reader)
Reviewed on July 13, 2004
Right to the point on this one.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 11, 2004
painfully to the point ...

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on July 11, 2004
Sounds like it needed to be over, well penned John, could feel the frustration in this one.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 11, 2004
Sorry to read about your pain John!!

Geez... John I think I know the feeling buddy!!

Take care my friend!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 10, 2004
John you make things so clear and still maintain
the rhythm and rhyme.That's a real gift. I'm glad
you have a talent to help you through this period.
We all learn from you in this genre;-)

Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Reviewed on July 10, 2004
I agree with Lady Peg, John. You describe something that happens to us so easily...emotional entanglements become so painful because things aren't clear....letting go can be so difficult, but you have reached clarity here...great assertiveness.

Gina

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on July 10, 2004
many times in life we see more than were meant to or we reach when we shouldnt the pain in this one is real..
Excellent read of expression John....

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on July 10, 2004
Good on you. Well done, John.

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on July 10, 2004
can feel the pain, palpable behind the rhythmic flow of this poetic proclamation. stand firm, Dawn

Reviewed by Anniemoh Ohio
Reviewed on July 10, 2004
Ouch. Sounds like someone did somebody wrong. Not nice! Very confident poem about moving on.


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