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What Did I See?
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What Did I See?

What did I see so long ago
That made me have to love you so?
What made me think in Heaven’s name
That love was more than just a game?

I can’t remember what it was.
Perhaps I’m better off because
If I could see it still today
The pain would never go away.

The pain of knowing what can’t be-
Whatever I no longer see.
I just must learn that what I feel
Is not a part of what is real.

Still, I can feel some phantom pain-
Some part of you that will remain-
A reason shadows will persist
Of dreams I must have somehow missed.

John H. Bidwell

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 Reviews of "What Did I See?"
Reviewed by Richard Arrington (Reader)
Reviewed on October 26, 2009
A very good poem, thank you.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on August 8, 2006
Excellent Mel Blogged Write On In Your Face,i.e. Pious Jews Pain Will Never Go Away...

What Did I See Of Dreams I Must Somehow Have Missed...

TRASK

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
Reviewed on July 24, 2006
The longing in this poem is clear, John. I hope this is a fictional write because you seemed so happy, the last time I heard. This piece reaches the innermost facets of the human emotion and I pray that, if true, you find peace in your own words and poetry.

Jill

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 18, 2006
an emotionally stirring poem celebrating the pain and joy of love's phantom embrace ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 14, 2006
John this poem stirs all the emotions, such pathos with a love that hurt too much to be real.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 14, 2006
Wow....the longing in this one is touchable....felt it!!

Hope you are okay John??

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on July 14, 2006
Yowch.

Hugs, my friend, hugs.
Tami

Reviewed on July 14, 2006
Great longings in this one!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 14, 2006
Touching and painful write that all who have truly loved and lost will feel very deeply.

Fee

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on July 14, 2006
aaaaah another masterpiece..I simply love your poems..
exceptional!

Vesna:)

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on July 13, 2006
fantastic imagery...feeling a phantom pain...that's simply brilliant when used in regard to emotion...I very much appreciate this poem.

Susan


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