Your writings have such a tone of softness to them... one that allows the heart and soul to feel your words and be a part of your world--feeling the feelings of which you write about. Keepsakes allow us to hold those feelings we treasure in our hands...making that which is intangible, tangible...
with every stanza i read, i could relate, understand your feelings, at times i felt i was invading my moms privacy till i ran across a picture of her and dad holding me as a baby between them, i treasure that picture, just as you treasure all the memories and keepsakes they left you, your words are beautiful and i enjoyed reading them and remembering...thank you
love and hugs
mary etta
Excellant write John, my first attempt at a book was based on the letters my Dad wrote home during WWII and they didnt' lie either but they gripped my heart for a man who until I read those letters..didn't really know.
I am sorry for your loss, John. Beautiful poem, nicely arranged and so much feelings in it. I am sure your parents loved you dearly and still love you from Heaven.
Love, Ankin
Superb poem,John! A tribute of love to your parents,nothing better than that! Funny how we become more familiar with time after they pass. I see my mother in the mirror,so often,especially faults like hers, I used to say I would never have;-)
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She proved them wrong...
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Cryssa
love and hugs
mary etta
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Love, Ankin
Regis