Stillness erupts (poem) by Chanti Niven on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 6, 2005

Superbly introspective and expressive so that others may know you. The symbolism enhances the meaning. Dearest Chanti, you are a beautiful poet and I am honored to have met you. Love.

Regis

Reviewed by Nicholas Tillemans

Reviewed on August 15, 2004

Chanti,

I liked this one. It sparks the imagination.

Thanks

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on July 30, 2004

An excellent, excellent piece, Chanti. I love the change in font size, it so helps to deliver the message. I especially like this:
"I stand, nostrils straining wide,
and swallowing the wind
as the dying light of day
casts shadows on the altered scene"

Good work, my friend!

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell

Reviewed on July 25, 2004

Chanti,

I read a lot into it not just your words but the use of font size as well and then the photo. It almost scared me, I saw so much. Even though the last line in the poem is a 'positive' expression there is a lot of altering as in the line b4 that to get to a good place. OK, I am confusing myself as well. lol I know what I mean, I just am having a hard time communicating effectively. OOO, one last thing the color of the type says a lot too. OK, I'll shoosh for now. ;) Take care my lovely friend.

Love, Janny xoxoxo

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on July 24, 2004

Nice. Very inspirational verse. Enlightment is what it is all about. Well crafted. Enjoyed.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 22, 2004

Chanti, a magnicficent poem which embodies the
very essence of transformation! Done with such
clarity of vision! Kudo's

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on July 22, 2004

An extraordinary piece of writing, from an extraordinary poet!

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on July 22, 2004

'Behold in change, I am made new'
An awesome revelation

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on July 22, 2004

Absolutely beautiful! Outstanding poetry,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Jeff Mason

Reviewed on July 21, 2004

beautiful journey for our minds! -- Jeff

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 21, 2004

this poem is like a transforming landscape in the midst of enlightened change ... well done!

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on July 21, 2004

Chanti, this is an extremely powerful muti-layered insightful write. Outstanding work.

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on July 21, 2004

"Stillness erupts" and its transforming power is felt through the lines of its stanzas... Rich imagery and profound message.

I have read a poetic-philosophical masterpiece.

Keep posting - DEPOSITING YOUR TREASURES IN THE BANK OF OUR HEARTS, - and Your DIVIDENDS will GROW in grace of our admiration.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU