Something I wrote many many moons ago but have resurrected to place here.
Riding along an empty road Dark into dark a white line goes Eyes fixed, I stare ahead to a point beyond the horizon Body on autopilot I float and glide Lean into the curves Machine follows There is a place where I can go Where pain no longer matters Time moves slow I feel invincible Nothing can harm me The air rushes past me and whips my hair around my face I revel in the feeling of this mad race I do not know where I am going How can I be more lost than lost? A real adventure begins When you do not know your destination or where your journey ends Fear can only be conquered when it is stared at in the face Spit upon Treated with disdain A real hero feels the fear and does it anyway
do not know where I am going
How can I be more lost than lost?
..indeed I can relate to the above..wish I didn't!!!
excellent verse Chanti'
Vesna .)
vesna :)
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on August 5, 2004
Chanti,
I was passing by and received your ad message...
Timing was perfect this is one awesome poem,
Powerful and so true.... As the world Turns saga
of fate it is always there. generation after generation
but this ending was check mate...
Excellent....
How can we be more lost than lost is a good question, but in this world to day many times I am more lost than lost and then a fear within comes.
Interesting write for sure you have done
Tommy
Excellent work, Poet. So very true Chanti, for some days are easier than others, yet, one must forge ahead no matter what the circumstances. I live by the motto, “get busy living or get busy dying.” I chose to stick around as long as I am able to breathe on my own, if not, then by all means, pull the plug. Thanks for sharing your remarkable talent. May the winds of change always flow easily through your hair, my friend. Hope you feel better soon.
P.S. I’d love to know how far out of the ballpark I was on that poem, “The Kill?”
This is a book of free verse poetry that addresses the seven main tests in life and offers some sensible solutions to passing those tests with minimal discomfort.
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How can I be more lost than lost?
..indeed I can relate to the above..wish I didn't!!!
excellent verse Chanti'
Vesna .)
vesna :)
I was passing by and received your ad message...
Timing was perfect this is one awesome poem,
Powerful and so true.... As the world Turns saga
of fate it is always there. generation after generation
but this ending was check mate...
Excellent....
Will miss you,
LP
Interesting write for sure you have done
Tommy
would that be lol Sorry just had to.
Hugs Dale
Robert
When you do not know
your destination
or where your journey ends
How true, for so many situations in life. Well Done, Chanti!
It is energy turned into power when we conquer it!
Love the art too!
inimitable, timeless style. I could feel both the wind and
the fear, in my own nostrils.
Love Tinka
P.S. I’d love to know how far out of the ballpark I was on that poem, “The Kill?”
(((HUGS))) and love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
an excellent write--thank you for remembering our heroes--a most awesome tribute to bravery at its best :)
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.