River of stars (poem) by Chanti Niven on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)

Reviewed on March 8, 2009

FABULOUS! Your tender way with the written words.

Reviewed on January 27, 2007

I�m in awe and bow to your literary skills. You have a way of making
words come alive and leave me wanting for more. There�s something
magical about the way you write � so heartfelt

Hugs, Susan

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on December 13, 2004

Soul-reaching and captivating in scope of meaning and emotions expressed. Thank you for sharing this offering, Chanti. Love to you. Regis

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on December 12, 2004

an outstanding write

William .....Peace & Love

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on September 2, 2004

stunning title.....beautiful write.......wow

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on August 22, 2004

A beautiful piece, Chanti. (Geesh, I've been so far behind; it's good to read you again!)

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on August 19, 2004

so gorgeous!

Reviewed by Erica Ivory

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

STUNNING!!!

Erica~~

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on August 13, 2004

Beautiful words, beautiful art. Wonderful, Chanti. Congratulations on its publication. N.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on August 12, 2004

So lovely, serenely intense. A joy to read.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on August 12, 2004

A river of stars..And other outstanding discriptions, sure make this some fine write..

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on August 12, 2004

A beautiful piece full of hope.
'A river of stars' I watch ;)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 12, 2004

Beautiful and masterfully Done Chanti!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 12, 2004

Can see why it was published - it's extremely lovely, and very good!

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on August 12, 2004

Chanti,
Beautiful piece. Very eloquent and endearing. You have a masterpiece here. That last verse is filled with emotion and so beautifully stated. Thank You for this excellent read.

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

Truly lovely imagery in this masterfully crafted poem, Chanti. Many congrats on getting it published!

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

Chanti, this is an exceptionally well-written piece of emotive poetry, highlighting the unique challenges presented to two inhabitants living in different time zones trying to keep each other well informed. Although one wakes to a new day, as the other is getting ready to rest for the evening, they�re trying to share whatever precious moments they can through each other�s eyes. An excellent composition with outstanding imagery and stunning poetry pouring, off the page my friend. Congratulations on having this magnificent timeless creation being selected for publication! May you always continue to enjoy much success and have good fortune follow you and yours throughout your journey through time and space. Bravo!

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

Chanti, your poem installs tender soulful romance...I'm with the rest of the reviewers...this deserves to be published...Fletcher B

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

this poem instilled such a beautiful feeling of love's delicate nature ... such a poem deserves to be published ...

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

A worthy and deserving piece to be published Chanti
Alive with imagery and visuals

Peter

Reviewed by George MacLean Akurunwa

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

It deserves to be published. Bravo.

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

Star studded writing, Chanti!!!
I am so happy it got published.
The graphic sets the tone beautifully, too.

Been trying for hours to access your page here.
Don't know why I couldn't. Even my tracking system
didn't sent me the notice. I had to look this up
on the Poetry Page.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

Splendid Chanti! A lovely poem, deserving of publication. Kudo's!

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

Very nice. Beautiful images.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

Wonderful painting and beautiful poem. Enjoyed this, Chanti!

Sandie May Angel

Reviewed by Anthony Hall

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

Chanti, you have painted a wonderful picture of 2 hearts embracing across distance and thru pain, to be bathed and renewed in that 'river of stars'.

most excellent write!
Anthony

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

I have stars on my mind too; tonight is the annual Perseid meteor shower! You can bet I will be stargazing later on! LOL Wonderful write, Chanti; thanks for sharing!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

(((chanti)))

we both have the stars in our eyes--this is absolutely sublime! rich in imagery and nuance--well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.