Sun dreams of moon (poem) by Chanti Niven on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 27, 2007

I envisioned a love affair between nature�s own - Crossing paths
never to unite. Beautiful imagery�
The closing of a day...the opening of another.

Hugs, Susan

Reviewed by Barbara Terry

Reviewed on April 26, 2005

Thnx Chanti for this very romantic poem. The language is very sweet, and something we would say to our beau, as we lay looking up at sky. May the Lord Jesus bless you and yours, and all those whom you love, and be with you laways, and at your side constantly. With much lvoe in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie

"If I have to be this girl in me, Then Imay as well be."

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on August 30, 2004

Wondrous language here, Chanti. Enchanting.

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on August 29, 2004

Fantastic write
smooth as silk

William ....peace

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on August 28, 2004

I love the beauty ingrained in these lovely verses of yours, Chanti'. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on August 22, 2004

Sigh...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 21, 2004

I love this Chanti! Very serene yet passionate and sensuous!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 20, 2004

serene beauty!

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on August 20, 2004

Exquisite. Enchanting imagery!

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed

Reviewed on August 20, 2004

Oh wow, this is "beautific"! Imagery Imagery IMagery! It reads like it's a flowing silk scarf like the one being worn (by you on the front page) revealing the soul (eyes) of the poetic depth that I feel AND see in this.

flow on flow on. . .
blessin's
cynth'ya

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on August 20, 2004

Oh such serene beauty. I love this Chanti, it's so lovely.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on August 20, 2004

(((chanti)))

excellent, beautiful poetry--BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart

Reviewed on August 20, 2004

I like the phrase "cloak of milk." I tried to wear a cloak of milk once when I was a kid. It didn't fit. ba dump bump

But seriously..........This poem reminds me of the movie Ladyhawk, in a way. Where two lovers are cursed so that they are only able to see each other at sunrise or sunset. Together forever, forever apart. Perhaps you were inspired by this story?

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 20, 2004

Gorgeous poetry Chanti!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on August 20, 2004

Very beautiful Chanti .....
Peter

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on August 20, 2004

Georgous write, love the discriptions...

Reviewed by Reginald Birch (Reader)

Reviewed on August 20, 2004

Beautiful Chanti, as ever.

Reg.

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on August 20, 2004

A most beautiful Lady the moon, she
always inspires me. :) Excellent piece!
Dale

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on August 20, 2004

As elegant an entrance and exit as a beautiful queen in
a gossamer gown. The graphic merely enhances the full-bodied,
lyrical, visionary write you have penned, personifying nature,
while bringing two human beings into clear focus.
I love it!

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on August 20, 2004

This was so beautiful, lovely verses,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on August 20, 2004

An impressively well-crafted elegant composition my friend. Thank you for sharing it. Take care.

Reviewed by William DeVault

Reviewed on August 20, 2004

Beautiful word choices in a well spoken voice. Enchanting.

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on August 20, 2004

Dearest Precious Chants,

Another one of your exceptional writes.
Your talent is incredible, never stop
precious friend.

Warm hugs and love
Elga :)