Poetic flirtation (poem) by Chanti Niven on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 6, 2005

You flirt with words and always come out the winner in masterful poetry dearest Chanti. Love.

Regis

Reviewed on November 9, 2004

How in the world did I miss this one? So good!
I loved it.

Reviewed on August 29, 2004

Now how could I not read this one? I, myself, have logged many hours in the local cafe just writing and watching life unfold. Nice to see you know how it feels.

Reviewed by Anthony Hall

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

Chanti, another marvelous musing! I am going to take inspiration from this and do the same while I am in Rome, observing and enjoying the energy of the Italian people.
Ciao bella!
Anthony

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

Chanti, as someone with your astounding talent to able to draw a vivid picture along a sidewalk caf� reminds one of the importance of observation, and having a pen and paper nearby. Thank you for sharing a slice of your day. Take care my friend.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

Gem of a write...You have captured everything that needs to be captured....cheers...love n luck....BHUWAN!!!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

Eyes filled
with dark mischief
Flirt with page

Poetry...

And very good, too!

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

This smacks of life!

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

short and tasty
sounds like me when i am blocked ....lol

William

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott

Reviewed on August 24, 2004

Great job...~Z~

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on August 24, 2004

I like this, Chanti! Short, sweet, and yes, so flirtatous. Great use of simile. Love the graphic. (eliminate "the" ;)

Hugs!
Tami

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on August 24, 2004

Chanti, I love it...you have in a sense captured a nice descriptive comparison of poetry flirting with thoughts...isn't it amazing how the greatest poetry written was probably done so in some of the most ordinary of places...this inspires me to let myself go more with the poetry flow...excellent poetry...Fletcher B

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 24, 2004

this is just fantastic ... you really capture the mood and atmosphere of a poetic flirt ...

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on August 24, 2004

Chanti -

Penned to poetic perfection - excellent all the way ...!

Robert

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on August 24, 2004

i too love the word lascivious, it just sounds so....lascivious, boy how's that for redundence...this is an excellent comparison

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on August 24, 2004

Well, yeah. It works that way. LOL. You used one of my favorite words, Chanti--"lasciviously"--all the amateur psychologist will have to figure that one out. ;-)
Good poem. Liked the graphic too.

Reviewed by Cynthia Castle (Reader)

Reviewed on August 24, 2004

What a unique and thought-provoking write, Chanti! ...Love the graphic, also! People watching can be very interesting and inspiring! Well done, Dear Poet!

Cynthia

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on August 24, 2004

(((chanti)))

poetry is whatever you want it to be. :) and yours is delightful! deliciously tempting! :) BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on August 24, 2004

Dear Chants,

hee hee, sure know that look, "eyes filled with dark mischief" indeed (Smiles) flirt with page ..... aaahhh poetry lol thanks my friend.

hugs and love
Elga

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on August 24, 2004

"Flirt with the page" is a wonderful line. People watching can be a productive past time. Enjoyed.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 24, 2004

Fantastic capture of the moment Chanti!
I flirt the same way;-)Great insight!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 24, 2004

Bullseye...I flirt on my page all the time......lol biting my lip...licking it...sticking my tongue out like a tired dog...lol...Oh Boy...Whata face to watch....lol!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on August 24, 2004

Deliciously sensual...with a hint of more to come...Lol
Peter

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on August 24, 2004

Oh...oh...oh...I wish I could have been seated in the
cafe where I could SEE you...inspired like that.
These words are so luscious, I can almost taste the sugar
in them! "Dark mischief" in blue eyes...hmmmm. Yes, that
would be something to see.
I loved this snappy little poem. It is effervescent!