Again, this poem is a break from my usual style but the expression is meaningful. I hope that this inspires others to stray from the beaten track.
My life hasn't been one of comfort and ease I've stubbed my toes and scraped my knees My eyes have seen more than they should've seen Many would be shocked at the places I've been I've scaled high mountains and crossed the sea In the pursuit of danger I thought I was free
Later in life the risks became less I knew that my choices led to my stress I learnt about balance and it all made sense It isn't a good thing to sit on the fence To watch in envy as LIFE passes you by to moan and complain, to grumble and sigh
Why throw away your paddles and stay adrift when life is so good and each day's a gift? Yes, it's not easy to take a new road Maybe help another with their heavy load. but if you face ALL with enthusiasm and zest At least in the end you'll know you gave it your best
~Chanti~
When we were children my brother Rupert and I loved to explore and discover new things. We especially loved walking through the tall grasses in the fields, so tall that at times it was impossible to see where we had come from or where we were going to.
How much of an adventure is it if you know what the outcome is?
In many of these explorations, we discovered wondrous new things. Had we stuck to the beaten path, much less would have been discovered and fewer lessons had. To this day I am inclined to step off the path and try a new route. I have been lost more times than I can count but my adventures have allowed me to see things that I would not have otherwise seen.
Are we sometimes so stuck in a rut that we are not prepared to try something new? Does fear stop us from stepping off the path we've made for ourselves (comfort zone)? Of course there are risks when taking a new road. You never know what danger lies in wait but you will also never know what might have been discovered if you didn't take the chance.
Thank you for sharing your wonderful and adventurous spirit and the gift words. How true it is that we must venture beyond the borders comfort and complacency in order to discover the true nature of ourselves...
There is much wisdom in this beautiful poem, Chanti. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace. Regis
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on September 26, 2004
Chanti my friend, I could easily copy and paste my last review from the “Past, Present, Future” poem, and apply it to this stunning creation, but then I’d be accused of not reading this magnificent piece and giving it my best review …lol. Not by you of course. And I do thank you from the bottom of my heart for everything. It is plain to see why I continue to enjoy visiting your remarkable Den. There are too many reasons to list why it is so important not to get stuck in a rut, but I’d have to say the most important one is that “Life is too short!” Keep reaching for a better tomorrow and before you know it, it will be here. I hope your brother is doing well, and I am quite sure with your support and guidance everything will out for the best. Thank you for sharing your work. Take care of yourself and yours and be well. Keep The Faith.
Questions, unquestioned discoveries, and answers in parable and rhyme…. This collection records a journey starting with a 1960s retrospective and the first man on the moon, moving to a new millennium welcomed in with a terrorist spin, family crises,
Best wishes
beaten path has gotten me into a whole lot of
trouble. lol But I wouldn't change a thing.
Thanks for sharing!!
Love Tinka
"slice of life" verses!
I love, too, the colors you used...and the florals...
Your words lifted me from some deep dark holes I rambled in
this day. Thank you, dear Chanti.
A very inspirational and original new road...
Yea it is good to be innovative and inventive...
Peter