You! (poem) by Chanti Niven on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 11, 2005

Raw emotion, Raw passion, Loved it!

Paul:-)

Reviewed on November 3, 2004

Passionate beyond belief.
Intimate relief
Loving and tender
With love from this sender

Well Done
Miller

Reviewed on November 1, 2004

Wonderful tribute dear Chanti. It brought to mind a poem of the same name that I wrote some years back. I like yours better!

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on October 27, 2004

Beautiful, like the author!
I'll bet that the "special person" is smiling widely and
feeling very warmly towards the writer at this time.

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on October 25, 2004

Very romantic and passionate.

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on October 24, 2004

Chanti, although this poetic treat was short, it packs a wonderful meal for the soul. An excellent tender composition, my friend. Thank you for sharing your work. Take good care and be well.

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on October 24, 2004

a warmhearted tribute, softly written

peace and sunshine

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 24, 2004

(((chanti)))

such emotion and beauty in this perfect little gem--BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on October 24, 2004

This is a little great poem... "You!" fills the jar of love with the flower of poetic grand from the garden of true romance.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on October 24, 2004

Straight from the heart...
Peter

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 24, 2004

Beautiful Chanti!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 24, 2004

Wonderful write!

Reviewed by David Anthony

Reviewed on October 24, 2004

A nice expression of love.....! I look forward to reading the rest of your works.

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on October 24, 2004

A heartfelt write to be consumed with ease.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 24, 2004

Where once there was a hole,
now whole...

Marvelous, Chanti!

Reviewed by Alice Cooper (Reader)

Reviewed on October 24, 2004

Chanti .... you are right in critizing Tinka's grammar. Sometimes she makes mistakes. But the proper place to leave these comments is not on her work. They have a message section Chanti. And tht is the place to use. Then she won't have to delete your coments. When a person drags the persons mistakes in the open ... it sounds like you are trying to one up her. Show show more respect toward the poet. Ok

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 24, 2004

Wow, what a wonderful blend of complicity and simplicity straight from your heart...
Felix

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 23, 2004

Soooooo lovely. I wish I were the recipient. Thank you for sharing this offering, Chanti. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Jeff Mason

Reviewed on October 23, 2004

Quite beautiful, indeed. Verrrry passionate! -- Jeff

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 23, 2004

Very beautifully said Chanti!I love the pottery too;-)