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Shock and Sorrow
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I wrote this a couple of nights ago and didn't intend to share it but I thought maybe it would be good to share my thoughts. I wonder how many like me are shocked what this kind of show reveals about humanity.












Shock & Sorrow

 

Tonight I sat,
cross-legged upon the couch,
my notebook in my hands,
awaiting a whisper from my muse.
The TV on but just loud enough
to break the silence.

A strident voice
broke through my dreamy reverie
and I grimaced to see
a chanting throng of Jerry Springer fans.
My attention captured,
my forehead creased in a frown.
and I watched,
feeling the bile rise in my throat
as I looked upon the obese form
of a young girl, stripped naked, 
hurling abuse at her blowsy mom.
A shocking confession -
"I'm a whore and my lover is my pimp!"
Defiant, she screamed obscenity
and spat hatred,
while her mother hung her head.

The audience jeered,
depraved and wild.
Some laughed and others cheered.
One man grunted like a pig.

They saw an object of ridicule.
something to make a mockery of
All I could see through my tears
was a young girl, only a child
crying out for love.


~Chanti~
                                                                                                                     




   

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Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on November 24, 2004
Chanti keep telling it like it is for someone has to be the voice piece and you do it so very well I admire your integrity to broing forth such issues. be blessed..

Ladye Peg

Happy Holidays

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on November 24, 2004
Great poem Chanti....

Springer is the most crass thing to come out of America.....Oh how I hate that stupid show.

ty, Dani

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on November 21, 2004
A to the point, insightful write..very well written

Walk in peace, Carole

Reviewed on November 20, 2004
Chanti,

So glad that you did! Insightful write brimming with grand imagery ... enjoyed!!

Best wishes,

Robert

Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
Reviewed on November 15, 2004
this is a nice poem such nice work , yu just say it so well al

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on November 15, 2004
Yes...the world is sick to the core...but it was prophesied
that this would come about:
"...men will become lovers of themselves...lovers of money...having no natural affection," etc. The evil abounds, and that is why it hurts tender, loving hearts such as yours. One day, though (it is also prophesied)...these things will come to an abrupt halt...by the hand of God...not man.
Then beautiful people like you will enjoy every aspect of that
New System, with no heartbreak or tears.

Reviewed on November 14, 2004
(((chanti)))

and they wonder why everything is going to hell in a handbasket--people allow themselves to be degraded and make money off of it...on national t.v., or else just don't care anymore. it's cool to tease the obese, the disabled, those less fortunate than us...how sad. that's why i don't watch talk shows.

shattering comment on today's sick society--effectively and heartrendingly penned.

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 14, 2004
A most powerfully meaningful expression, Chanti. You are so right in what you say here. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Janet Parker
Reviewed on November 14, 2004
An excellent observation on the decline of humanity. As I read, my heart was breaking. I'm still feeling that pain in my chest. I can't watch trash like that.

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on November 14, 2004
Chanti, every now and then, usually when I'm in a hotel room, I catch the Springer show. It is shocking to me the level of degradation that occurs on that show. I compare it to ancient Roman times when the Gladiators would be in the arena fighting wild beasts - some of which were humans.

Seems like since the dawn of time, people have enjoyed watching others be shamed. Maybe it makes them feel better about themselves. Maybe they lie to themselves and say "that's not me, I'd never do that." Not realizing that the audience is part of the problem, by giving attention to innocent young people, who as you noted, are starved for attention. Okay, I'll stop now.

I almost forgot to say - Great poem. ~ Sara

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 14, 2004
man's insensity never amazes me ... it seems when people are in pain, consciously or unconciously, there can be big money to make ... a sad statement for the times we live in ...



Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on November 14, 2004
Chanti, I have watched that show many times and have always felt it was totally “Trash!” I wonder though why you put the disclaimer on top, after all isn’t that what writing poetry or writing anything is all bout? Being able to verbally express your own thoughts, feelings and sharing them with the world? I believe Master Poet Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU says it the best! “Vandals!” His extraordinary vision and ideals always enlightens those willing to travel outside the box!

However, I also believe that television has brought to life many good things to our spinning world along with the sometimes trash, and the not so wonderful side of mankind’s ignorance and hatred towards each other. So has radio, yet without these forms of communication, how could one tell the difference between good and bad?

It always saddens me whenever anyone uses someone else to further their own hidden agenda. Oh well, life moves forward, and the sun shall rise again tomorrow, and one must be able to go with the flow, or be drowned in the wake of evil forces, which continues to pull on us each and every day.

Your unique gift, talent and poetry as usual, allow one to think, which is always a good thing. Hopefully OUR Den and fellow Authors/Poets will allow ourselves to support and enjoy each other’s work, and make whatever comments we feel necessary without being accused of backslapping or seeking brownie points. I enjoyed the read, my friend. Thank you for sharing your work. Take care and be well.

Reviewed on November 14, 2004
That is what the VANDALS call "Freedom". That is how they earn their living, and they will get richer, until people - the audience - allows them.

Thank You for Your VOICE to Justice.

Healthy Blissful Day!

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on November 13, 2004
Oh yes, things like this just make me cringe..your poem expresses this so perfectly. I feel for the people on this terrible show.

Reindeer

Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Reviewed on November 13, 2004
Thanks to all those who've taken the time to respond to this poem. I don't watch this show and never will again because I agree it is gross exploitation of human beings. Whether the people who take part are playing out their real lives or acting is immaterial, it is immoral and demeaning. I cannot write any human being off as trash and not worthy of love but I can join your voices in sharing my disgust at the exploitation through sensationalism that this show promotes. I still feel sick when I think about it. The image of that clown-like young girl with too much smudgled make up all over her face, naked and screaming is something I wish I could erase from my mind. How would someone like that be if she had been brought up in a loving family and given some form of self respect?
Thanks again for your feedback.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on November 13, 2004
Shows like this really shine some clarity on the word dysfunctional in "dysfunctional family" don't they? In some ways, I believe that there are those people who just shouldn't breed. They spread their sickness on to generation after generation. Great write, Chanti and you are so correct in your observations.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 13, 2004
Once again you've touched on what a lot of people felt but couldn't put intp words.
Felix

Reviewed by George Jackson
Reviewed on November 13, 2004
You wrote what you thought and felt...if not, why bother to write at all? Our world has enough turmoil without having to watch a show like that...with nothing ever resolved, except a few token words from a man that obviously doesn't care much, one way or the other. A very good poem, I thought. Thank you.

Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on November 13, 2004
It simply shows that people like Springer (and the networks) get rich off other peoples' misery and misfortune. -- Jeff

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 13, 2004
Glad you shared the poem Chanti. I know exactly how you feel total disgust and sadness!In today's society freedom seems to be equated with immorality the right to do whatever you want especialy trashy sex and language. I only watch news on tv, it has become a garbage dump for the most part.

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on November 13, 2004
YOU THINK LIKE AN ANGEL OR FLORENCE NIGHTINGALE
MAKING A STATEMENT SO NAIVE ABOUT THE TRASH THAT EXPLOIT THEMSELVES AT JERRY'S FREAK SHOW
MOST OF THE GUEST THERE COULD GAG A MAGGOT
WITH THEIR STORIES AND PERFORMANCE

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on November 13, 2004
I wonder if any of the Jerry Springer show is ACTUALLY real, I mean they only seem to get people of the trailer trash variety, from the deep south of the US with that accent so you know they are supposedly dumb backwoods folks...I mean come on, that must be staged, they all must be good actors that have yet to be discovered and paid for what they do on that show...there is no way all that that shows portrays really happens...? Well at least someone is making money off that show, Jerry himself...good thoughts here, Chanti...Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on November 13, 2004
Satan's World Is Full Of His Freak's----What Else Do You Need To Hear,i.e.Write Springer Letter Tell Him Why He's An Psychopathic F--king Idiot--Voice Your Thoughts On All His Satan's Freaks Of Planet Earth! That Man Is Real (Human) PIG!

TRASK

Reviewed by Michelle Mills
Reviewed on November 13, 2004
Amen sister!!! You see it the way I see it. Anyone who would go on television to demean themselves in that way is only a little girl who wants attention...I think it's even sicker that someone of Jerry Springer's intellect can't find a better way to express his talents. Wasn't he the former mayor of Cincinnatti Ohio? That's a big city...How pitiful that someone who had no doubt seen heartache and poverty in his home city as a public servant could willingly exploit others who weren't as privileged as he for the sheer love of ratings and the money they bring. Good write Chanti...as always, excellent! Blessings, Michelle

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on November 13, 2004
I think most of them all and they sure do not need his emotional baggage added. And ABC pulled Saving Private Ryan? What part of that does not make sense?

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on November 13, 2004
Sad. Nice write.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on November 13, 2004
Deep and moving write from a heart full of compassion.


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