This is stunning! Very compelling expression of emotions from deep within your heart and soul. A painful write which you have penned with beauty. Blessings to you.
Cynthia
Reviewed by Silke Lance, Dr. Ph (Reader)
Reviewed on December 4, 2004
Excellent work!!
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on December 3, 2004
Chanti, this is a brave and painful to read peice.
This gives me tremendous pause; makes me think, and drink in the words. There are such subtle nuances in this little gem. I always enjoy reading you. Don't ever stop writing. -- Jeff
Breathtaking Chanti, like the creator it leaps the bounds between what is real and what is burried deep wihtin ones heart. You have the power of poetry Goddess on your side.
Thanks for letting us glimpse inside your emotions,
Felix
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on December 2, 2004
Chanti, I doubt very much that anyone could ever forget your stunning poetry or you, my friend. This poetic treasure just strikes all the right cords. The flow and emotional outpouring is truly remarkable. It’s another outstanding timeless creation from your gifted quill. Thank you for sharing it. Take good care and be well.
Chanti, it's like you reached into the deepest corners of my memory and wrote what you found there. This is amazing work. One of your very best. "Resting in the mind of a man who loved a notion...powerful elixir, such passionate potion. I never existed but in his mind." I can't believe how true this rings for me. Blessings, Michelle
Chanti, an exquisite poem deeply stirring haunts the soul.
outstanding work! I have thought this often , but never able to translate it to paper...thank you for sharing this gem!
A people’s heart can be found in their poetic words. In history men and women have stood firmly upon their soapboxes and street corners, rallying the deepest beliefs of people to rise up and be heard. The poetrypages.com has offered that voice a new
your nu nu Paul :-)
This is stunning! Very compelling expression of emotions from deep within your heart and soul. A painful write which you have penned with beauty. Blessings to you.
Cynthia
You are a very strong lady.
Splendid that you feel up to this.
Rest of your life is for living..
GAD this is excellent, emotive, powerful piece. i agree, a masterpiece--BRAVA!
love the write AND pic--and those last three lines--SHATTERING
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :( *tears*
very artistic graphic above it!
flower - revealing the feelings of soul - through its magic words.
Thank You, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reindeer
Excellent work!!
You are a special friend too okay!!
Love Tinka
Thanks for letting us glimpse inside your emotions,
Felix
outstanding work! I have thought this often , but never able to translate it to paper...thank you for sharing this gem!