Sonnet #1 (Salvation) (poem) by Chanti Niven on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 29, 2005

Hi Chanti,
I was drawn to your site, as one of my friends mixed up your name with mine recently :)
So here I am, and I was drawn to this write first.
Yes it screams, like we do, when we need deliverance from the evil that binds us..
Beautiful work
Love Ch'erie

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on December 20, 2004

Chanti

This just screams one word, Awsome! Shakespeare would be proud.

Reviewed by George Jackson

Reviewed on December 19, 2004

Chanti? Sometimes, I too have trouble finding the words to describe how much I like something I read. This is one of them. Very well done.

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on December 18, 2004

Chanti, so often, one must scream out loud in order to release the wicked demons that plague the inner spirit due to living in a world gone mad! I enjoyed this piece, although I wish human beings would never have to go through any rough times. An excellent job. Thanks for sharing your talent. Take care and be well.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on December 18, 2004

(((chanti)))

an emotional, inspired, inspiring sonnet you have crafted--brilliant!

(((HUGS))), love, and Merry Christmas, karla. :)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on December 18, 2004

I know I am somewhat biased but I think this sonnet is superbly created. I find them so difficult to put together that I don't even try. This is inspirational and has profound significance for all; a wonderful creation, Chanti. Much love to you. Regis

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on December 18, 2004

very good and moving. have a great holiday Chanti. l&p G

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on December 18, 2004

Fantastic collection of images and thoughts! This is an inspiration to all who are going through dark times.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on December 18, 2004

Deeply felt Chanti!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on December 18, 2004

Sigh........

Reviewed by Jeff Mason

Reviewed on December 18, 2004

This is, at once, both heartrending, and hopeful. Simply beautiful. I must endeavour to write more sonnets, for they do sing to the soul and speek deeply to the heart. -- Jeff

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on December 18, 2004

Chanti...oh...oh...oh...
I am virtually speechless at the magnificence of this
deeply moving write!
The graphic gives added depth, but, even without it,
this would be a most stirring write.
Kudos, sweet lady!

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on December 18, 2004

Enjoyed the reading of this ENGLISH SONNET. It flows in harmony throughot its lines. Its closing lines are very impressive in beauty of the major art.

Keep writing, Poet!

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Michelle Mills

Reviewed on December 18, 2004

SO beautiful. Knowing your story as I do, I can feel the cleansing in this piece even more strongly. Such a blessing to read. Michelle

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on December 18, 2004

Simply splendid Chanti! I agree with Sherry, you did this
sonnet with eloquent expression of grace!

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on December 18, 2004

This is an excellent sonnet, Chanti. You have presented this with grace, beauty and strength.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on December 18, 2004

Excellent piece. Love his Can i compare thee....Darling buds of May one..

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on December 18, 2004

A wonderful piece of sonnet poem. Chanti, I applaud this.

Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on December 18, 2004

Powerfully penned, Chanti.

Reviewed by Mary Quire

Reviewed on December 18, 2004

Awesome write! I love what you have done with sonnet. The torment she experienced can be felt in your words, as well as the mercy that was bestowed upon her. Sonnets in Shakesperean style are by far my favorite. Thanks for sharing this one.

M.Rose

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on December 18, 2004

As always you amaze me with your ability to blend written word with both insight, passion and just the right graphics. Keep it up Chanti always a pleasure to review your work.

Felix

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on December 18, 2004

Chanti, You do these well. You've a wonderful gift, and I thank you for sharing it.

Lisa