Shadows at my feet... (poem) by Chanti Niven on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on September 11, 2005

This poem Chanti touched me deeply--- and Thank you for all your sweet kind reviews on my writings of my heart- Sorry- it took me awhile to find this deightful Poem-Glad I didn't miss it- WArmly,Sheee

Reviewed by Pierre Ortega

Reviewed on September 5, 2005

I only hope our children will be privileged to enjoy a world even half as lovely as the world we have known, for I fear it will be twice as terrible.All we need is love. Pierre

Reviewed by Masood Lohar

Reviewed on April 8, 2005

it touches deep!

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on April 5, 2005

This is extraordinary, Chanti!! I cannot believe that I have not already reviewed this, as I was thinking of the very visual second half of this poem only yesterday, allowing its beauty and inspiration to settle into my own bones to fuel whatever it might within ME!! "The lambent touch of sunlight tracing my form and teasing the dark shadows that chase after my feet" - so playful and free and the idea of something I would like to toy with myself!! Those sensuous and laughing words have stayed with me. Just delightful, thank you. And as always, Chanti, you just take my breath away with your glowing appreciations of my work... I am just speechless with such feeling. I can really never thank you enough for so building my self-esteem. Bless you always. Love and prayers, Kate xx

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on April 5, 2005

Beautiful Chanti, this is outstanding, love this poem!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Koty Lapid

Reviewed on April 2, 2005

Wonderful presentation and writing

Koty

Reviewed by Steve Patterson

Reviewed on March 31, 2005

well said. well read.

enjoyed the pic too. oh to be a child again, and the pleasure of just runnig thru the grass.
TX

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on March 31, 2005

what a lovely write...very very immaculate write...love n luck....BHUWAN!!!!

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on March 29, 2005

Very lovely ... both poem and picture!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on March 28, 2005

Chanti,

An innocent, exhuberant, childlike wonder to your words--thank you for penning this precious write!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 28, 2005

Life truly is precious - and this is a precious write, Chanti.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on March 28, 2005

Chanti,
Your poetry is so soothing and lighthearted. You have captured the heart and innocence in this poem. Exquisite write.

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on March 27, 2005

Emotionally stirring...and beautiful...like the writer.

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on March 27, 2005

Lovely, Chanti. Its only natural to want to affirm life as we see others infirm, and return to the sweet innocence of youth when touched by sadness and helplessness...

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on March 27, 2005

Simply beautiful!

Love, Light, Joy, Peace & Creativity,
Joseph

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on March 27, 2005

Such leveling thoughts. Gotta live every minute. Chantililacewithasilverfaceawigglewhenshewalks..

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 27, 2005

This wonderful creation flows from the beautiful soul that you are and completely captivates and enthralls the reader. Your talent vibrates throughout this poem. This is a masterpiece, dearest Chanti. Thank you for sharing it. Much love to you. Regis

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on March 27, 2005

this is a gem!

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on March 27, 2005

Of course you know I can relate.
Life is fragile and precious.
You've captured that here, Chanti!

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on March 27, 2005

Beautiful, Chanti. I identify with this poem.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on March 27, 2005

Chanti, there is magic in your pen as you trace your thoughts and memories upon the page. This is delightfully beautiful. Happy Easter to you and your family.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on March 27, 2005

Chanti once again you capture the uncapturable. The childlike innocence of the little things we forget to love and enjoy. This poem triggered a lot of memories of simple day to day things that we forget or refuse to enjoy as we get older. Thank you for the reminder.

Felix

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 27, 2005

superb presentation and beautiful poem, Elga ...

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on March 27, 2005

lovely

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 27, 2005

Beautiful Chanti!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Jeff Mason

Reviewed on March 27, 2005

Beautiful sentiment, expressed well in a short space. Life is precious indeed. Seeing friends whose lives have been cut short makes a poem like this strike home quite deeply. -- Jeff

Reviewed by Henry Stevens

Reviewed on March 27, 2005

Chanti, very beautiful poem. You presentations are outstanding. True art. Henry

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on March 27, 2005

Beautiful Poem Chanti, it reminds me of a game I used to play as a child jumping on and chasing shadows...been doing the later ever since lol.
Happy Easter chuck

Paul;-]

Reviewed by Barbara Terry

Reviewed on March 27, 2005

Awwwww this is very touching Chanti. It is an reaffirmation of life, that makes us want to live it to the fullest. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy tot he world, peace on earth, (((((HUGGGGSSSS))))), and a very Happy Easter, cause He is risen Barbie

"If I have to...Then I may as well be."