This has meaning for me. Written at 3 am in the morning during a sleepless night. The sketch is my own.
Features blotted out An ache resonated within my words In an instant you heard me Received me Believed in me Stripped naked before your eyes Nothing left to hide In that instant you saw me and adored me Finally I understood I was not found with your senses but in your soul All along I've been in you I am you and you are me...
Maybe we've all known each other before. excellent Pierre.
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 28, 2005
The depth of the romantic write is amazing! Great sketch!
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2005
Chanti, both poem and artwork are very well-done, my gifted friend. It’s wonderful to see your ray of light flowing through your magnificent poetry and artwork. Thanks for sharing it. Take good care and be well.
You have clearly defined that moment of awareness when we realize that we are not alone and that we are not now, nor have we ever been a solo traveler. Great job on the poem and on the art.
Take care,
Sherry
Loved the way the very first line tied into sketch. The word "awesome" is so overused anymore, but it may be the best single word to describe the combination of your art mediums! - Duke
when we look deep inside our selves we see who and what were really are: pure, unadulterated and a reflection of all there is ...
i feel an powerful affinity with the core of this poem ... excellent as always ...
Reviewed by Alex J (Reader)
Reviewed on August 20, 2005
Interesting poem and artwork. What medium is this done in? It looks like a photo with some filter work.
An intense balance of crisis and resolution through the recognition of self within the presence of adored "other." From the aptly mystical image in the sketch to the exquisite articulation of the verse that follows, ALL ALONG stands as a mixed media feast for the mind and spirit.
... Straight to the pride of place in the library! :)) CHANTI! To say this is the eyes, breath, mind and fingers of angels would be laughable understatement: this is grace pure and potent gifted upon you, not only as salve of your own soul but to minster to the depths of all who are privileged to drink it in. If I were able to create such perfection even once in my lifetime, then my life would have been worthwhile. You think this is Kate hyper-babble? It's Kate very, very awed... and grateful. Bless you for the wonder of sharing in this. LOL Kate xxx And, yes, I speak just like wot I write... :))
Wow- Chanti' YOur artwork is amazzzzzzzzzing...... Awesome! Your poem so True and Pure of True unconditional Love- felt by a Pure heart and Soul- This Poem is written in such a peaceeeeeeeeeeeful and serene way- I feel blown awayyyyyyyyyyyy........Thank you Chanti' - hope your days are serene as well~! GOD Bless! WArm HuGs-Peacefully,Sheeeox
The purity and honesty of this write is a perfect example as to why you are loved and admired by so many as a writer and as a friend. this is a fantastic write...pure poetry at it's finest.
Would that it be so, Chanti. I can feel you through this. Probably you don't want me to. You don't know how much this touches me. It's okay. Don't worry about it. Please don't be upset. Respectfully yours in love always...
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Enter the pages of diaspora in quiet introspection. Bathe your thoughts with subtle humor; synchronize your spirit-sense with history-in-heat; fall headlong with eyes wide open into
blessin's
cynth'ya
Hugs Paul;-)
This touched me to the core. Thank you.
Love,
Tami
Take care,
Sherry
i feel an powerful affinity with the core of this poem ... excellent as always ...
peace, Carole
Awesome.
Lisa
Love Tinka
Felix
... Regis (Reg)
in every way...beautiful! The art is very expressive.