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Anthology II (Snippets)
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A continuation from the anthology I posted recently. Inspired by my experiences over three of the most magical weeks of my life.

-1-
Why is it that being in love
makes even the simplest of activities
seem momentous and meaningful?
We walked through a shopping mall
hand in hand smiling into one another's eyes
stopping at times to share tender kisses
and whispered endearments
We had lunch at a quiet Portuguese restaurant
and you spooned fresh oysters into my mouth.
Teasingly I caressed your leg with my foot
and you took it into your lap
and massaged it gently
The table seemed too wide
- a great divide
when love flowed sweeter than wine
We shared a bottle of vino verdi
and spoke of our dreams
of being together forever
Forever is but a moment in love...


-2-
I loved seeing the wonder in your eyes
The way you tickled the lion cubs
and filmed their playful antics
Enthralled that you could get up so close
You stepped in a pile of dung
and when I pointed it out
You grinned and said "Lucky it wasn't you!"
I'd taken my shoes off (stupidly I'd worn heels)
Cheekily I retorted "I watch where I walk"
Seconds later I tripped
and had to be helped to my feet - blushing.
Oh the irony!
We giggled like children
as we made our way back to your car

-3-

You were supposed to film the lions
I turned to find the camera trained on me
and stuck my tongue out
I'm camera shy you see
Still you captured wonderful footage
A regal male lion, head turned to the wind
A sleepy pride but a few feet away
We watched to the African beat of Savuka
an ambient accompaniment
and felt a deep sense of being alive

-4-
We set out early
to visit Gold Reef City,
passed Soweto and I told you
about the riots that happened there
during those dark apartheid years
You wanted to travel the Golden Highway
bit I cautioned you about the danger
and suggested another route
We got lost and you joked
about my poor sense of direction.
With mock indignation I protested
but knew I couldn't deny.
We had to ask for directions
Still it was one hell of a ride


-5-
A funfair and wind in my hair
Your curls ruffled and your eyes blue as sky
I asked myself why
it had taken so long to find
a love that has overtaken my mind
and delivered my heart
in all it's raw vulnerability
into your hands.
The answer came to me
as we walked arm in arm,
hundreds of invisible people
milling about, faces I couldn't see
I'm ready now to love
To receive from you
no need for any proof.

Copyright Chanti 2005
    

 
 

 


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Reviewed by Masood Lohar
Reviewed on October 30, 2005
All loves are great. But very few have an opportunity to find an artist like you Chanti to make it eternal with the strokes of your muse. I feel so good reading your poems. The feeling is like we spot a cute small kid at market place, smile at her and get a smile and tender little gestures in reward!
Masood

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 28, 2005
Love the romance budding in this incredible romantic write!

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on October 28, 2005
Chanti, this is remarkable poetic feast from a remarkable Poetess. As Cynthia says, “it’s such a glorious feeling.” Excellent write and thank you for sharing it, my friend. Please accept my sincerest congratulations and best wishes to you both and may you enjoy each other completely as you march toward utopia. Take good care and be well.

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
Reviewed on October 18, 2005
wow. this is so beautiful. congratuations on finding such a great love!

Reviewed by Cynthia Castle
Reviewed on October 18, 2005
Chanti,

It is such a glorious feeling to be so in love and to be so loved ...a feeling I know well and am constantly thankful for. When you meet your true soulmate, you both just know that it was always meant to be. I am so happy for you!!! Beautiful poetic story that reveals an enormous love from your heart and soul. Take care and Blessings to you and Eddy.

Cynthia

Reviewed by Barbara Terry
Reviewed on October 13, 2005
OMH Chanti this is so beautiful! I wish I had a love like that so that I could be happy and just carefree. Giggle like a schoolgirl again, and love as well as be loved, by a man who is so decent he makes my soul soar. Thnx for sharing dear, I really liked this poem. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, stubborn to a fault, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your sad and terrified little sister, Barbie

"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I may as well be."

Reviewed by Lori M (Reader)
Reviewed on October 12, 2005
Awww...how lovely!Great poem here!
Love to the both of you!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 12, 2005
Awwwww beautiful..hopefully it was Knysna oysters...they do have that kinda magic eating them!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on October 12, 2005
Chanti,
One can see the love building in your story. An excellent foundation for happiness.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on October 11, 2005
Beautiful, you two are very lucky...

peace and love, Carole

Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on October 11, 2005
You two are very lucky to have shared such moments! May you share many more such unforgettable experiences! -- Jeff

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on October 11, 2005
Such a beautiful finish, Chanti. I am just bursting with joy for you, my friend!

Love you lots,
Tami

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 11, 2005
a wonderful romantic sojourn ... i'm happy for you ;)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 11, 2005
A captivating poetic tale. Thank you for sharing it, Chanti. Love and peace.

Regis

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on October 11, 2005
I really like these story kind of
poems. Thanks.....

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 11, 2005
Beautiful images captured of what love is all about when it is new and I pray that it will always be true and eternal for you Chanti. No one I know deserves it more.

Felix


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