The night before the hot air balloon ride I barely slept Excitement rippled through my being I woke every hour on the hour and mentally urged the clock forward with child-like impatience Finally, before the dawn I emerged from my bed Rumpled and sleepy-eyed Flushed pink with excitement and dressed in haste I applied makeup to my face then tiptoed quietly from the house and drove upon a surge of adrenalin, breathless with anticipation.
-2- Excitement has blurred many of the details but I remember in vivid slides the sights, the sounds, the scents of that day's events. You held my hand tightly as the basket lifted from the ground beneath an enormous arc of fire-warmed air wrapped in a kaleidoscope of colour. We floated quietly upwards The balloon as graceful as a cloud adrift in air, still as prayer The world is a different place when viewed from there
-3- You wore your Ranger Rick jacket The one with forty two pockets and countless lost objects ;) You spent much of your time patting your chest in search of one thing or another and I in laughter (another memory I'd love to share) The fire of the burner seared your head I wore a big hat and those silly green glasses and was conscious of nothing but the proximity of your body the touch of your hand that promised kiss
-4- We sailed upon wind currents shadows trailed the verdant earth Our faces lit with wonder Soul imprints like photographs in a moving collage. Inspired by the beauty surrounding us and far below A different view - a new perspective We could only know once we were there
Chanti, you have written another masterpiece. The love and anticipation of being with the one you love, is so heart warming, that I cannot relate, tho I wish I could. Happiness for me, is to be happy for others, whose life takes a postive and promising turn. Kissing in a mine shaft, and then in a hot air balloon? That is as positive and romantic as it gets I guess, because each time was a rendevous with destiny. Isn't love just grand? That's what I heard anyway...Good luck to you and Edwin on your journey of love and romance, forever. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and thoes whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, stubborn to a fault, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your still very sad and terrified little sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I may as well be."
Hot Air Balloons are amazing magic!! They are all the rage here in New Mexico where we host the International Balloon Fiesta every year...the largest gathering of balloons in the world. I love them and I am blessed to see them in the air here on any day with accomodating weather, but during Fiesta, there are between 750 to 1000 balloons in the sky here in this little town every morning in mass ascension...What a thrill. Your poem is beautiful, Chanti and it does the balloons justice. There is nothing in the world like being up there looking down here!!
Take care,
Sherry
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Reviewed on November 1, 2005
I've always wanted to go on a hot air balloon ride. Thanks for sharing the excitement of your experience.
I don't think you need any suggestions. This is virtually perfect as is... and the ripples of the air currents were in time with our heartbeats and were the pulsing synchronous blood coursing through our veins... we merged closer with ev'ry touch, as all of time stood still; as if at long last, an unfulfilled prophecy had come to its ultimate and destined realization; and even the angels in heaven were in awe of the perfect love and the unbreakable bond that we both shared, in this brief yet infinite and unforgettable moment of eternity. -- Jeff
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Great write!
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I may as well be."
Love,
Tami
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love and peace, Carole
Take care,
Sherry
Love & Light,
Joseph