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David, my Goliath!
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Coming back to SA after being away for almost four months, brought its own shocks. My son who seemed to be but a boy when I left has turned into a man. When did this happen?


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When did you get so tall my son?
Once I cradled you in my arms
And now you hold me to your chest.
Where once I held your tiny hand
Yours now holds mine.
I feel awed when I look up into your eyes,
shining with bright blue mischief.
You're barely past boyhood.
- only just turned fourteen
but you're already over six foot four.
Your childish giggles
have given way to a manly chuckle.
Your voice has changed.
and the deep resonance surprises me.
Still I am your mother
and you will always be my child...


I love you Tiger!

© Chanti 2006
 
 


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 Reviews of "David, my Goliath!"
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on April 1, 2006
It's a particular blessing that my son, nearly 17, is just about able to look down on me now... we strain for every millimetre of height in this family!!! It is a clinical fact, I believe, that sons will ALWAYS be taller than their mothers... and a particular JOY for me to be cradled and held in my own son's arms after so many years of holding him to me... Aye, Chanti, our mothers' hearts just go on and on fair BURSTIN with love, adoration and pride for our boys whatever the season... for our girls, too... but reckon their is just something EXTRA in the crossovers in the sexes, mother/sons and fathers/daughters. Just wait til Tiger goes a courtin... !!!!! :)) Beautiful family moment, Chanti... Bless you. Kate xx

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 25, 2006
I know that of which you write, Chanti. I wear my son's shoes that he's outgrown. Love-filled write. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed on March 24, 2006
Very sweet thought presented in a beautifulway. I feel as if I am with David, your six footer son! Every mother sees a man in her son and feels proud about him! Nice write dear Chantal!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 24, 2006
beautiful poem ... before you know it they're towering over you ...

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on March 22, 2006
My son just turned 24 two weeks ago, and this brought about so many fond memories for me. I enjoyed this very much.

Hugs to you, my friend.
Tami

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on March 22, 2006
Delightful! I enjoyed!

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on March 22, 2006
A sweetly lyrical "mother-son" moment.
Your absence has not dulled your touch, milady!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 22, 2006
"When did you get so tall my son?" Reminds me of a song I heard long ago that slips my mind just now. I hope your time away was good. Lovely, very lovely poem.

Reviewed on March 22, 2006
Yep, know this feeling, they just go ahead and grow up, while we have our heads turned. Great write,
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on March 22, 2006
Ah the same holds true for my son, Shaun. Once the skinny little sprite, allthough he will be the perennial child. Touching write, Chanti...

Lin

Reviewed on March 22, 2006
Tender and heartfelt; no matter how big the kids get, they are still your babies! Very well done, Chanti; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 22, 2006
It is both a happy and sad occasion when a parent comes to this realization, sad that the little child that was so happy to cuddle in Mommy (or Daddy's) arms is now an adult, but also happy to know that our worry, hard work, love and teaching has paid off and produced the pride and joy before us. Well done Chanti
Felix

Reviewed by Michelle Mills
Reviewed on March 22, 2006
A tender wistful write my friend. I love it. Michelle


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