A thoughtful write. It's just as well I don't post all of my ramblings on here. Now and again I feel compelled to share. This is one such time.
When I feel cornered or confused I pick up a pen and I write. Words are my tools and my weapons, With them, I chase my dreams and chronicle my disappointments. The page is never judgmental. I am able to pour out my heart without fear of criticism or condemnation. There is catharsis to be found in expression. Relief is gained by 'thinking' in print. I don't always find answers but at least I can record my questions. Sometimes they are answered in time and I'm able to look back at the process from a new vantage point. (Somewhat like looking down at the hazardous cliff face from the peak) In so doing, I gain understanding. Writing doesn't solve my problems but sometimes it is the means that provides the way. A well trod path to enlightenment...
This is one path where I've kicked up the dirt until dust clouds have blocked my vision. It always encourages me to remember that when the dust settles, the ground is fresh and ready to be patterned again.
what would we do without a pen huh? Probably write our thoughts within the sands and if we could we would color them upon the waves or scream them within the canyons so they could echo within the stones....questions, answers, they are all there within the whispers of the wind.....and so , we write......
Very nice work on this expressive display of your thoughts...enjoyed reviewing, but most of all writing back....nice, nice work...
Boy- this sounds familiar, I just wrote a poem recently in response to feeling cornered and needing to get it out. Writing it out just seems to help and make it known *( to you and your heart and soul) Wonderful Poem and with a flowwwwww Chanti~ I enjoyed this Poem alot! Even tho' it was months ago, I'm glad I gravitated to it tonight! STay SAFE and STAy Happy! Warmly,*She*
well written, Chanti ... i enjoyed reading your poetry again ...
Reviewed by Amy Avatar (Reader)
Reviewed on April 27, 2006
So well said..."The Power of a Pen"...
able to bring tranquility
to the mind...by sorting out chaotic thoughts...
I am impressed with this lovely poem.
Amy Ramdass
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on April 26, 2006
It may not solve them, yet if we keep secret our pain, it is no gain, lest we remain in some "false nobility" only to our demise.
When a cancer is in ones life, get it cut out..
Ah yes Grasshopper...You have found the path to enlightenment. I have seen you move across the room like a spirit-cat, with purpose, grace and elegance, to fetch a new power-pen when yours had run dry. You tread new paths not yet trodden and that is truly the treat...:)
Chanti, the pen is mightier than the sword. It can deny you your life, send you to the gas chamber, it can put you on the street, It can deny you the very basic of all rights...to be.
Like Tami, I found my self nodding as I read these lines. They are so true. I have used my pen to enlighten others, as I trod down that path to enlightenment.
Thanx for sharing, Chanti, this is very good.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on April 25, 2006
...and planted with lovely visions such as you describe in so many of your works, Chanti!
Chanti
It is great to see you posting again, your absence has been noted from the Den !
It is imperative that you retain your colossal confidence and self assuredness, it is only when you are in a sanguine frame of mind, that the answers to the equations materialize, Chanti..
Create your dreams in the spirit world first dear friend, and then watch them materialize in the material world !!
Love, Peace and Harmony
Peter
All paths to enlightenment are subjective I think...no matter what you do to achieve that enlightenment, that is your path...we all have our paths and follow them the best we can...I think more ramblings might get you there faster...if not, what can it hurt...? Ed
"I am able to pour out my heart
without fear of criticism or condemnation"This is ver nice chanta! You are utilisng the might of your pen for cleaning the house, your conscience! Poetry is all powerful and much we gain in live thro' the experience and wisdom ofother poets. This is the very purpose of poetryforums. The other important purpose is to enlighten, entertain, infuse and inspire the reading pub,ic on various issues connected with life. weldone dear chanta. Thank you for sharing your mind with all of us.
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Very nice work on this expressive display of your thoughts...enjoyed reviewing, but most of all writing back....nice, nice work...
Art Sun.....
Go onward, steadfast...
Until all is tried and true;
Let not detractors tarry thee;
Go forth and seek the answers...
Which indeed do...
reside in you. -- Jeff
May the power of your pen be like a gentle wind that breathes upon the sails of your soul to carry you, safely, home.
Love & Light,
Joseph
Regis
able to bring tranquility
to the mind...by sorting out chaotic thoughts...
I am impressed with this lovely poem.
Amy Ramdass
When a cancer is in ones life, get it cut out..
Good poem Snuggles !!
Like Tami, I found my self nodding as I read these lines. They are so true. I have used my pen to enlighten others, as I trod down that path to enlightenment.
Thanx for sharing, Chanti, this is very good.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."
Felix
It is great to see you posting again, your absence has been noted from the Den !
It is imperative that you retain your colossal confidence and self assuredness, it is only when you are in a sanguine frame of mind, that the answers to the equations materialize, Chanti..
Create your dreams in the spirit world first dear friend, and then watch them materialize in the material world !!
Love, Peace and Harmony
Peter
without fear of criticism or condemnation"This is ver nice chanta! You are utilisng the might of your pen for cleaning the house, your conscience! Poetry is all powerful and much we gain in live thro' the experience and wisdom ofother poets. This is the very purpose of poetryforums. The other important purpose is to enlighten, entertain, infuse and inspire the reading pub,ic on various issues connected with life. weldone dear chanta. Thank you for sharing your mind with all of us.
Hugs,
Tami
the path to enlightenment.;-)
Love,
Eileen