We’re together now our presents converged Memories traded but pasts left behind Our futures forged as we stand side by side
At times we battle in a struggle to be redefined How do I find myself in you and how do you find yourself in me? Can we remain two separate beings yet evolve into something new?
There is no logic in love no reason to be found in passion. We feel what we feel there’s no denying. and if we said we had no doubts we'd both be lying.
We’re complex human beings with many layers to peel Every day we make discoveries some are superficial, but many more are real
We chose to embark upon this journey to leave the past behind In this we took a chance but I don't believe that we were blind.
With eyes and hearts wide open we crossed vast seas of doubt to find ourselves upended upside down and inside out
Yes, there’s no certainty in this and we can’t count on anything The future has her secrets but I’m ready for whatever it will bring...
This is a very good romantic and passionate write about two souls on the path of life. There is a "however" tho.
However, love means different things to different people, but mostly it is good in their experiences. Then there are those that have no love, have never known true love, and have only had love in the form of being tolerated. L O V E is a four letter word, without meaning to some. May we all find that love, and hope that love will find us.
Thanx for sharing Chanti.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."
A very mature write, coming from the wisdom of a woman who has made peace with the past, and is ready to embark on a journey to her future happiness. I read it twice, and am going to keep it to remind me of what's important as well. Wonderful work Chanti. You never fail to inspire me. Much love from your friend Michelle
This is beautiful, Snuggles !!!! If, as Kate said 'you are the captain and the crew' then I'm damn proud to be the pirate that plunders your treasures....Aye Cap'n Aye !!!!
The Notorious Commander Cuddlechops at your service mam !!
Sails of love trimmed for venture and conquest of all of life's unforeseen and unknown peaks and troughs, this is a delightful avowal of commitment to the future and to forging a path of togetherness through it - notwithstanding ignorance or misunderstanding. Honesty is the vessel you sail in, Chanti, and, as such is pretty much unsinkable, whatever the weathers bring. I wish you sunshine and fair winds always, but also know that many waters are not crossed without the odd squall or two, for which you sound amply prepared! :)) You are both Captain and Crew and your voice in this most beautiful of love poems is assured. Just ADORE your penultimate stanza! Bless you both. Gorgeous pic. TY Kate xx
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2006
Mature and wisdom filled write, it shows deep strength of character and self belief.
Excellent poem Chanti, so much of what you written has a deep resonance with me. Once again things didn't turn out for the best in my latest romantic endevour. However, there is much I can take from your words. All the very best to You and Eddy, I hope the future is filled with joy and happiness for you both.
The choices we make is a word in each of these lines. Universally, our attitudes and actions combine to form your sentences, Chanti. You've allowed our collective characters to create paragraphs which quickly grow into pages and chapters of our lives. Together Now is something I would like to carry with me through the storms of life. A validating, well-qualified poet we have in you, Chanti!
Very sweet and wonderful musings for a person in love and looking forward to what love and loving offers in a world to oftrn cold.
Felix
Reviewed by Betty Torain (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2006
I like this POEM. I think love is always a leap of FAITH & TRUST.
I like the word NOW in your writing. All we have is NOW.
Thanks for sharing, Betty Torain.
"There is no logic in love
no reason to be found in passion"
I find these verses particularly "real" but the whole poem is soul-stirring, Chanti. Thank you for sharing your sentiments via your verses. Love and peace to you,
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thanks for saying YES to LOVE!!!
YOU are needed!
Blessings to you and to your beoved Snuggles!
Glorious work..Brava!
Vesna:)
PS Have you defined YOUR co-mission yet?
However, love means different things to different people, but mostly it is good in their experiences. Then there are those that have no love, have never known true love, and have only had love in the form of being tolerated. L O V E is a four letter word, without meaning to some. May we all find that love, and hope that love will find us.
Thanx for sharing Chanti.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."
The Notorious Commander Cuddlechops at your service mam !!
Wonderfully penned!
I enjoyed the heart-song here!
Blessings
Richard
When two hearts give each other the freedom to spread their wings, the sky is endless, the horizon beautiful and the two soar as One.
Love & Light,
Joseph
Paul;-)
Aberjhani
Enjoyed this one
William
Love & Peace
Sage
Felix
I like the word NOW in your writing. All we have is NOW.
Thanks for sharing, Betty Torain.
pax A
no reason to be found in passion"
I find these verses particularly "real" but the whole poem is soul-stirring, Chanti. Thank you for sharing your sentiments via your verses. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Hugs to you,
Tami