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Ultimate Temptation
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For my ulti-mate ;)

You are the ultimate temptation
An angel, descended from heaven
A devil ascended from passion's pit
With a roguish glint in your eye
you lead me into your lair
A wild bear, with claws
that gently skim my back
untamed yet tender
Like a panther that purrs
quietly into my ears
You soothe me
but at the same time
you tease me into tension
like a rubber band
stretched taut
then gently released
again...and again.

I carress your face softly,
delighting in your smooth skin,
warmly tinted with bronze
and trace a line from your throat
across your chest, 
and down your arms
tracing veins to the palms
Seeking the reciprocation
of your touch 
Fingers that frolic freely
upon a keyboard
play meaningful melodies upon mine
A tactile tune
that sings in silent sounds
to the beat of my racing pulse...


I don't ever want to be apart
from you again...


Copyright 2007 Chanti
           
 
 


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 Reviews of "Ultimate Temptation"
Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on January 19, 2008
Superbly sensual and romantic write filled with passion to the brim. Very impressive work.

Reviewed by William DeVault
Reviewed on August 2, 2007
Brava. Absolutely charming and inspiring.

Reviewed by William Heffner
Reviewed on July 22, 2007
Well done Chanti'.

God Bless You and Your Loved Ones

The Christian Cop

Reviewed on June 29, 2007
This romantic poem sizzles Chanti~!
Love your lines! and flow!
WArm Hugs and Love, WArrior "Spirit" Lady Sheeeoox
BE SAFE!
STay POsitive!
Always!

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on June 29, 2007
Chanti,

The melody is fine tuned to a symphony. Bless You Always, Paul.

Reviewed by Barbara Terry
Reviewed on June 27, 2007
Very romantic Chanti, and right from your heart. Thank you for sharing these tender moments.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your sister, Barbie

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 27, 2007
Great offering Chanti!!

You must be freeeeeeeeezing cold up your way!!

Ai dis lekker by die see!!

Love Tinka $*;*$

Reviewed on June 27, 2007
Chanti,

Absolutely a temptation one would have a hard time denying: beautifully passionate! Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on June 26, 2007
So very passionately loving and sensual! Enjoy the comparison of the soft, sleekness of animals to man.....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 26, 2007
Smooth love writing....

Reviewed by Jim Compton (Reader)
Reviewed on June 26, 2007
do what ever it takes
and never look back

Reviewed by H Cruz
Reviewed on June 26, 2007
You soothe me; but at the same time tease me into tension!
And need I mention...

Reviewed by Stan Grimes (Reader)
Reviewed on June 26, 2007
Excellent love poem. Tactile indeed. Good one Chanti

Reviewed by ' ' (Reader)
Reviewed on June 26, 2007
A symphony of contrasts. Great.

Reviewed by George Thompson
Reviewed on June 26, 2007
Great write, Chanti! Evocative, playful and full of mood swings.

George

Reviewed by Edwin Larson
Reviewed on June 26, 2007
Mmmmmm Snuggles!! Me neither!! Tough to respond to this 'cause Nicky (as always ;) stole my line "Wow" ;) I love you Chants!!! Thank you for this beautiful write....at least I'm not your pri-mate :)

Buford T Cuddlechops
Dept. of Sensual Wildlife

P.S. Andy...keep dreaming LOLLOL :)

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on June 26, 2007
Chanti, it's our secret, well i guess the world had to realise that fate can't be with-held..seya in the potting shed....

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on June 26, 2007
True Love is a precious gem. Enjoyed

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on June 26, 2007
Beauty pleading for this feeling to never stop. Lucky you. Lady J

Reviewed by Nicholas Geist (Reader)
Reviewed on June 26, 2007
wow.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 26, 2007
This is soo sensually invigorating to the senses of a lover denied then found again. Sweet song of yearning rewarded...

hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on June 26, 2007
Chanti, this is truly a romantic piece of writing, and I loved your metaphor, "Fingers that frolic freely upon a keyboard." I'd say this is a winner!


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