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Big City Fairy Tale
by Zenith Elliott → (All Poetry by Zenith Elliott)
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Fantasy...you think?

 


 


Hansel lost Gretal
he went to the store
bought some drumettes
began to explore...


Walked city streets
at a furious pace
an unbearable hunger
the drumettes he did taste...


Searching each pier
every one he explored
leaving a trail
of the bones, he ignored...


Mice disguised as men
scurried after his trail
now Hansel...like Gretal
are both lost...now, no more...


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 Reviews of "Big City Fairy Tale"
Reviewed by Donna Maris
Reviewed on March 31, 2004
lol twisted and irristable
I wonder if Hansel is like all men
exhibiting a one track mind?
:) Donna

Reviewed by andrea coltman
Reviewed on March 27, 2004
Thought provoking twist..enjoyed immensly...best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 26, 2004
Chillingly thought-provoking, Zenith. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on March 24, 2004
Zenith, looks like Mother Goose got cooked. Bill Murray

Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth
Reviewed on March 23, 2004
lol. Life ain't glamourous in the big city. We have just as much talent in a small town. Good one, Z.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 23, 2004
Ditto...

Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick
Reviewed on March 23, 2004
:-)

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on March 23, 2004
A fairy "trail" updated for the 21st century, very appropriate and quite excellent, ~Z~. Peace thru Fantasy, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on March 22, 2004
Satan Is Disquised Also As El Presidente Bush Even Your Best Friend-Do
Be Careful Who Smiles At You!

Excellent!

TRASK

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on March 22, 2004
well done, Zenith...nicely done, dark twist on Mother Goose.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 22, 2004
You did a great job on this twist;-)very graphic...

Reviewed on March 22, 2004
Clever write, Z! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 22, 2004
Very nicly done Zenith!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on March 22, 2004
Very nicely done

Reviewed on March 22, 2004
This was great! Loved this modern fairy tale!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on March 22, 2004
Nice fairy tale, Z.
Best regards,
Leland


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