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A TRUE POEM
by John Herlihy
Why is there always this presumption
That a poem has to be real?
Why shouldn’t it be sufficient assumption
That a poem has to ring true ?
I wrote about the distant horizon
And my desire to sit on its edge.
One reader chastised my judgment
Suggesting I should make a pledge,
Never to confuse truth and reality,
As though wishing to create a wedge.
I wrote about a profusion of tears
As an example of emotion sustained over the years.
One reader immediately sympathized with my sadness,
Attempting to replace it with some gladness,
When in fact I was merely expressing a universal feeling
That had no particular, personal meaning.
I wrote about two turtle doves
That morphed out of two girls’ simple love.
They later had unhappy lives,
Like worker bees in a busy hive,
Who actually lived in a simple hovel
And had much of their life to grovel.
One reader questioned whether I had an ex-lover
That I destined to work a life undercover.
Why does a poem have to be real,
As a reflection of one’s actual experience?
Isn’t it enough for the poem to be true
That makes its point, then bids adieu?
These are the questions a poet keeps asking
All the hours of a long day.
These are the issues worth raising
Instead of just making hay.
A writer can write just about anything, but it will be upto the writer to make the poem sound real to the readers in order for them to feel his/her words.
Poems, no matter if every line is completely made up and considered "fiction," in reality there is much of the poet in each and every line. You wrote about tears when none was forthcoming from you, but in fact you have shed many tears during your lifetime, therein is your reason for the tears within this poem. Poetry reflects mightily back to the poet.
First Edition Translation of Teselas by Carmen Crespo X111 César Simón Poetry Prixe 2016 Translated from Spanish by Robin Ouzman Hislop and Amparo Arrospíde
thought provoking read
well said
I've also had people comment as thou some of my poems were real. Some had deep sadness for me. In reality it was fiction.
Love and blessings,
Linda
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