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Promises Have No Now
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Wednesday, March 23, 2016    Rated "G" by the Author.
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Promises Have No Now
By John Herlihy

I
Promises have no now;
They live in the future, a sacred vow.
Promises lie patiently in waiting;
They have integrity so long as they are enticing.
When the promise happens or is no longer kept,
They are vanished, gone, dead without any precept.
Often they are whispered in earnest,
When broken, they become immodest.
They have arrived in the here and now,
Only to die an unnatural death somehow.
Promises march forth into the realm of neverland;
They return as pigmies sinking their toes into the sand.
Make me a promise that I can keep as my own;
Break your promise and I will leave you alone.

II
People promise what they hope to fulfill;
They make a pledge they hope to instill,
Into a brother, lover or friend,
To be true from now until the end.
We should not promise what we cannot do;
Otherwise, we will do something we cannot undo.
When I look into your dreamy eyes,
I see nothing but endless promise there.
When you close your eyes and turn away,
I feel nothing but an enveloping despair.
We make a promise said in good faith,
When we break a promise, it becomes a wraith.
A promise is wrapped in ribbons as the perfect gift;
When opened, it disappears into time’s bottomless rift.

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Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on March 24, 2016
"I promise only to try" might save us a lot of anguish.
Another stirring composition.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 24, 2016
You spent a lot of time extolling the virtues of promises, but only a couple on the broken ones. Fulfilled promises are wonderful and keep everyone's hopes up. Unfortunately, broken promises are more common than we would like. In a perfect world, there would be no broken promises. In the real world, they are many and we have to learn how to "roll with the punches" or not survive, at least mentally.

Ron

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on March 24, 2016
Wisdom personified here. A fine bit of perception that is oh so needed in this world of lies as the norm. Thank you for posting.

Reviewed on March 24, 2016
Oh! This write you have penned is chock full of truth! Broken promises, broken relationship. "We should not promise what we cannot do;" and "Break your promise and I will leave you alone." Something as simple as keeping a promise escapes some people leaving them alone and lonely.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed on March 24, 2016
the problem of human bounds, moral commitments and estimation of one's capabilities is brought up here in a series of subtle images which eventually disappears into the bottomless rift of the interim. Due to the presence of the 4th dimension, this poem is vested with enough emotions that elevate it above the ordinary. . . Cheers, alex


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