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Tuesday, April 12, 2016    Rated "G" by the Author.
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Dedicated to Rebecca McKeehen, who gave me the idea for this poem, that complements yesterday's poem titled "Incomplete".


Complete
By John Herlihy

Nobody told the soldier he was less than complete;
Indeed, it was too embarrassing and fully replete.
The man came back from war’s horror fully scared;
His face beyond recognition, totally marred.
He was prepared in action either to live or die;
Nothing had truly prepared him for a life in which to hide.
No one would have accused him of being incomplete;
No one would dare to suggest he was but brave and sweet.
He tried to carry on as though nothing had happened;
His own image of himself is what needed to be reckoned.
Yet the unhappy fact remains, the scars told a simple tale,
That dragged him unceremoniously thru sorrow’s vale.
But a strange thing happened when he looked into the mirror;
His misery drained away and his face lost that look of terror.
The sad eyes, the sculptured nose, the noble brow still whole
Through the features of his face shone the essence of his soul.

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 Reviews of "Complete"
Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan
Reviewed on April 13, 2016
Wrenchingly sad yet beautifully wrought. Thank you.

Rebecca

Reviewed on April 13, 2016
This touched me down in my soul! You speak for so many! Salute!!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed on April 13, 2016
now what I've said earlier concerning "Incomplete" might be put in the reverse about this piece. . . if only possible, . . but it is not. Yeah, Moses once was involved in killing an Egyptian to be punished for all; the mostly similar story was happened with Siddhartha Gautama when he striked with a stick two fishes, incarnations of the king's dynasty. . . the soul -- a person's moral or emotional nature or sense of identity, by definition; but for each of us personally it's something else which is beyond definitions. Cheers, alex

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 13, 2016
War changes boys into men in a way that mars rest of their life. They can never live life fully complete and happy life because of what they've seen or done.

Good stuff that's hard to swallow.

Ron

Reviewed by Jansen Estrup
Reviewed on April 13, 2016
I like this definition of 'soul' - "'Soul' is not a thing, but a quality or a dimension of experiencing life and ourselves. It has to do with depth, value, relatedness, heart and personal substance." Thomas Moore - Soul, so defined, cannot be complete until the end, and perhaps those great souls, then, have no end but live on in myth, story and our imaginations ...

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on April 13, 2016
War horrors, John are "complete" with internal and outward horrors. My uncle survived (barely) the Bataan Death March and years in a Japanese prison. What it did to him was, again, "complete" horror.


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