Dedicated to Rebecca McKeehen, who gave me the idea for this poem, that complements yesterday's poem titled "Incomplete".
Complete
By John Herlihy
Nobody told the soldier he was less than complete;
Indeed, it was too embarrassing and fully replete.
The man came back from war’s horror fully scared;
His face beyond recognition, totally marred.
He was prepared in action either to live or die;
Nothing had truly prepared him for a life in which to hide.
No one would have accused him of being incomplete;
No one would dare to suggest he was but brave and sweet.
He tried to carry on as though nothing had happened;
His own image of himself is what needed to be reckoned.
Yet the unhappy fact remains, the scars told a simple tale,
That dragged him unceremoniously thru sorrow’s vale.
But a strange thing happened when he looked into the mirror;
His misery drained away and his face lost that look of terror.
The sad eyes, the sculptured nose, the noble brow still whole
Through the features of his face shone the essence of his soul.
now what I've said earlier concerning "Incomplete" might be put in the reverse about this piece. . . if only possible, . . but it is not. Yeah, Moses once was involved in killing an Egyptian to be punished for all; the mostly similar story was happened with Siddhartha Gautama when he striked with a stick two fishes, incarnations of the king's dynasty. . . the soul -- a person's moral or emotional nature or sense of identity, by definition; but for each of us personally it's something else which is beyond definitions. Cheers, alex
War changes boys into men in a way that mars rest of their life. They can never live life fully complete and happy life because of what they've seen or done.
I like this definition of 'soul' - "'Soul' is not a thing, but a quality or a dimension of experiencing life and ourselves. It has to do with depth, value, relatedness, heart and personal substance." Thomas Moore - Soul, so defined, cannot be complete until the end, and perhaps those great souls, then, have no end but live on in myth, story and our imaginations ...
War horrors, John are "complete" with internal and outward horrors. My uncle survived (barely) the Bataan Death March and years in a Japanese prison. What it did to him was, again, "complete" horror.
Using Calgary as a backdrop the author satirizes the self-serving nature of the public as it continues to fatten itself, not only physically, but egotistically as well.
(Self-published. Please contact author directly to order.)
Enter the pages of diaspora in quiet introspection. Bathe your thoughts with subtle humor; synchronize your spirit-sense with history-in-heat; fall headlong with eyes wide open into
Rebecca
Love ya!
Jane
Good stuff that's hard to swallow.
Ron