He didn’t like the word;
But there it is:
Final.
It just sits there alone.
An old bone.
I
There is an air of finality about it;
You think there is no return.
No?
Never?
What happened to life’s sojourn?
You hear it and think: nothing else,
No near, no beyond.
Out fate is sealed;
It cannot be appealed.
It seems to mean the end.
II
Even the word “no” isn’t final;
It can mean yes.
It can bend.
Divorce isn’t final;
People get back together.
The seasons, the moon, the weather,
Nothing in life is final;
Things change, life is renewed.
It swiftly moves forward;
Sometimes it is subdued.
III
My school teacher once said:
That’s final!
But we continued to throw spitballs.
We told him nothing is final,
With spitballs, not with words.
Good-bye, you ask?
Not as final as you think.
We whisper it teary-eyed;
As if we have complied,
But even good-bye has a wink.
IV
Is death final?
Short answer,
Yes to death’s no.
Death is final;
It gives the word its meaning.
There is no turning back;
It is NO beyond all NOs.
It is rigid; it is absolute,
But for one small thing:
It isn’t the end.
Now when I hear the word,
I must smile.
I know.
There is no such thing as final.
It just melts, like snow.
What was it that Carl Sagan said we were? Made of "star stuff?" At its most finite that is what life is, cosmic dust. As to what more of it there can be that is left up to philosophers and dreamers and people of faith. I personally adhere to my belief in a supreme being who created every subatomic particle in the infinite universe and as such it doesn't make sense that there is just one end. A very thought-provoking read, nicely penned. Rebecca
Even a fallen tree rots and nourishes to bring forth new plants and vines in the woods for the little animals to eat who the predators eat who somehow in the food chain ends back in us anyhow. I've got myself confused but I sure enjoyed your poem a lot!!
I am grateful for the finality of some things. For, for some things to continue on and on is not sure anyone any good. If it buoys one up to think that good things are not final and will return… So be it, but I prefer to be more pragmatic and realistic, not expecting something that has little or no chance of happening.
saying the word 'final' or 'no final,' we thus interfere in the affairs of time itself, which is by definition out of our influence. This dialogue between the author and reader brings us to the image of snow which melts to be then frozen again when an appropriate time comes. In a word, there is neither Yes nor No that work properly if the time is wrong. The puzzle is still there: yes--yes or yes--no or no--no or no--yes?. . . only time will show. That's why I never get tied with speaking of '--' which is between the opposing sides. It seems to me the solution is somewhere there ;)) Cheers, alex
I agree, John, death is not the end. I, quite frankly, am looking forward to it. I know I will be reincarnated with my one and only love. That is my approach.
THERE IS SOMETHING THAT'S FINAL FOR ME, JOHN. ABSOLUTE, COMPLETE - NOTHING TO QUESTION ABOUT IT...GOD'S WORD. FOR ME, THAT'S FINAL. DONE WELL AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
David Hightower’s lyrically expansive meditation on the whims of fate and the unpredictability of the human condition fill the pages of THE HANGING MAN DREAMS with thrilling music and mesmerizing imagery. Hightower’s richly infused voice echoes the e
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Jane
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