You have given me many things to consider with the gold that flowed from your pen on this one! Fantastic stuff!! I can visualize the dreamy look of the ships passing 'neath the moonlight. True, no two things are alike. True, no two things are alike but then again opposites attract.
The rhythm and the word images are undeniably beautiful and rewarding. This is one of your best efforts. But somehow, right at the end I keep thinking of that famous phrase, "like two ships passing in the night."
the fairy tales from childhood presented so lovely thru this piece that none of the readers can realize whether they are here or there, in the remote past of the future. . . Cheers, alex
Your last stanza sums everything up, John, but all the stanza's before it was like a guided tour to make the reader (moi) prepared for, and to understand completely, the last stanza. An old adage .. . "No two things / Are alike." Old adage maybe, but you gave it extra, dreamlike, persona.
In the Whirlwind is a poetic storm that frees history from the cages of corruption and puts it in the hands of everyday people. Words are weaved into a new fashion statement that has nothing to do with runways but everything to do with projects!
Contraband Marriage, traveling along the hemline of loving after incarceration, is a love story written in lyric and free form, set in reality with a different ever after.
Fine writing. Enjoyed!
Lady Mary Ann
Love ya!
Jane
Ron
Dreamlike...
Diana...