Poems are not always serious; they can be fun. Here is an example of rhymes that run and run. . . .
Thanks to Kathleen McDonald for giving me the idea to write about shoes.
Those Wooden Shoes
By John Herlihy
Ah, these wooden shoes,
With their buttons and bows,
Displaying a design,
Only a Dutchman could impose,
Polished a shiny black,
Like the feathers of crows,
They keep my feet warm,
From the heel to my toes.
When I put them on,
They complement my clothes.
They assume an old-fashioned style,
That my lunatic friend chose.
They beat along the ground,
Notes a drummer would compose.
They lead me away,
In the direction of my nose.
We have been to places,
That nobody goes.
Where they will take me,
No one can suppose.
They take one step after another,
As the question arose.
Only the shoes themselves,
Are the ones to propose.
They even have a saying,
With wisdom to disclose.
Shoes make the man,
A saying everyone knows.
When I take my shoes off,
I am ready to doze.
Good night, sweet world,
These rhymes are at a close.
Pictures of different shoes came to mind
When I read this wonderful rhyme
Tired and worn brand new on a shelf
Each has a story within itself
but yours is the nicest I have read in awhile
Thank you for giving us all a smile
It is interesting how we can take a object like your friends gift of wooden shoes and turn them into a poem, either serious or humorous, depending upon our mood.
As a long distance runner and power walker before the sport became well-known, I can't for the life of me understand why anyone would ever want to walk any distance in wooden shoes. The resulting blisters from the shoes' inflexibility would be devastating. On the other hand, in a country like Netherlands, encased in mud or snow much of the year, warm wooden shoes might be a godsend. On the other hand again, rubber galoshes would probably be better and much lighter.
I have always wondered about the comfort of wooden shoes and now I have my answer. I'd love to see a picture of them as I am sure they are fine. You are just too cool!!!
John, just a great fun write. What I like about poems like this is the imagery it creates in the mind of the reader. Now I will be hearing the rythmic pounding of those walking notes all day in my head.
Dan
Ahhh . . . So that's what I have been doing wrong all my life, not taking the plunge and started wearing wooden shoes. You said, "They lead me away, / In the direction of my nose." In that sense I think I have worn those wooden shoes, at least metaphorically. I sure plunged ahead back in tha day following my nose, don't ya know.
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When I read this wonderful rhyme
Tired and worn brand new on a shelf
Each has a story within itself
but yours is the nicest I have read in awhile
Thank you for giving us all a smile
hugs
Kathy
With my sensitive feet wooden shoes
Would to me be a nightmare even in EEE
Peace be with you
William
As a long distance runner and power walker before the sport became well-known, I can't for the life of me understand why anyone would ever want to walk any distance in wooden shoes. The resulting blisters from the shoes' inflexibility would be devastating. On the other hand, in a country like Netherlands, encased in mud or snow much of the year, warm wooden shoes might be a godsend. On the other hand again, rubber galoshes would probably be better and much lighter.
Ron
Love ya!
Jane
Dan