We fret about the darkness of the night;
Thieves and goblins give us an undue fright.
Children listen to ghost stories and beg for more;
Ghosts make creaking sounds on the attic floor.
But our petty fears sometimes freely give way;
Our fear of the darkness no longer holds sway
Over the leisure of the evening smelling of musk,
Welcoming day’s end with the descent of dusk.
Flowers close their petals and call it a day,
But they stay awake at night and silently pray.
I see footprints in the mud that can only belong to a frog,
Croaking a few sounds before moving on in the bog.
The grass grows in the darkness as it does during the day;
Blind bats dart expertly through the trees in search of prey.
Fireflies glow in the dark shadows of the family bower;
They illuminate the night for me in my darkest hour.
Even the moon sits carelessly for a moment on the horizon,
Out of respect to the man in the moon now old and wizen.
People look forward with expectancy to the close of day,
The day’s work is done and the time has come to settle down.
The exhausted farmer wheels into the barn his wooden dray;
The donkey can now relax and munches contentedly on hay.
The leisure of evening descends with a stunning display of stars;
They shine mystery upon the earth we claim as truly ours.
this piece shows that you are a newbie in life of the countryside you've described in fine details. A farmer's life is much simpler than that but much more busy so long as he doesn't get out of his routine which literally reduces to 'early to bed early to rise. . . to continue in such a way till the weekend or the seasonal holiday to feast.' Well, but then the countryman opens his eyes and mouth to tell you something you've never heard about but what lies just under your feet. A good try anyway. Cheers, alex
You have covered the wonders of evening very well. For most, there is no need to fear the dark. Civilization as nearly wiped out all the predators that once lurked in the dark and laid waiting to pounce from the darkness. But the stories continue, once meant to protect children, but now only to put fear in their hearts. No longer able to go outside and enjoy the evening without the piercing light of LEDs and the watchful eye of their parents. What a shame!
Beautiful tribute to the evening. This reminds me of hayrides and finding constellations. The evening holds blinking animals eyes, hooting of owls, and fireflies. Soft breezes over the Marsh and Lagoon with their bullfrogs, eagles, snapping turtles, and magic.
Love the simplicity of your expert penmanship, John. Even though the dusk is plodding on toward night, your lines show vitality even as night sleeps. Life abounds even as we close our eyes to it in the midnight hour.
Inspirational poetry, written from the heart and soul. Verses that are well-suited for reading on a rainy day and that are guaranteed to bring a smile to your face.
Ron
The final two lines are simply brilliant!
Michael D.
Love ya!
Jane