Loved the poem, but after reading it several times, do feel you might consider placing the "mystery" line just ahead of "My life is my river." I only suggest this because of what precedes and follows the "Mystery" line as its reads now are real life examples building to a metaphoric wrap up that when the "mystery" line is placed as suggested, the rest of the poem fulfills its subtle transition into the tabular spirt of the thoughts. Of course, this is just a suggestion to consider, you may have an argument for its placement of how it now reads I just missed. The overall message of the poem still comes through as wisdom seeking simple examples to share as some of the many paths we are confronted with. Well done.
Isn't it refreshing how mother nature encourages us to explore? Thanks for the uplifting poem. The only thing I would question is that I think that you hesitated about going deeply into the cave to discover its last crevice… Claustrophobia?
Curiosity and perseverance empower us to face challenges and make discoveries. This is what sustains life and personal growth. Your poem weaves this message through the marvels of nature.
Mary Angela Nangini's poems celebrate the richness of life and love. From the city to cottage-country and the roads in between, Nangini explores the changing seasons of her varied region. (This book will soon be reprinted in hard cover.)
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The poems in this beautifully bound book are a result of over twenty years of observations. Observations of the world around us and on the telecommunications network. All of the hate, love, heroism, disasters, and those who help.
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And enjoyed I did
:excellent write John peace be with you
William
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